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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Judgment Day"Do good and feel good poems
29 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
In deed a dire warning for those who are not saved. I have heard people say they don't care if they go to hell. All the fun people will be there. Little do they know. Well done acrostic with a warning and good news for the Christians.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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In deed a dire warning for those who are not saved. I have heard people say they don't care if they go to hell. All the fun people will be there. Little do they know. Well done acrostic with a warning and good news for the Christians.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Roxanna, yes, we all need to heed the call. Life is too short, but eternity is forever. We don't want to be on the wrong end of that. Thank you so much for the kind review and comments. Always so appreciated!
Comment from pome lover
A different biblical acrostic about Judgement Day. "Dire judging could mean scathe?"
I did get the point, but that line seemed forced to get your meaning across in rhyme. Otherwise, a good prayer for everyone. We need it.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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A different biblical acrostic about Judgement Day. "Dire judging could mean scathe?"
I did get the point, but that line seemed forced to get your meaning across in rhyme. Otherwise, a good prayer for everyone. We need it.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you so much Katharine. I do appreciate the great feedback and comments. Both mean so much to me. I will go take a look at that line and see what needs to be done. I am always so happy when someone brings those things to my attention. Thank you again dear friend.
Comment from karenina
Great job on a rhyming acrostic! You went above and beyond! (Literally...considering theme!)
Corinthians 5:10
"For we must all appear before the judgment seat of Christ, so that each one may receive what is due for what he has done in the body, whether good or evil."
(There is no VIP exception!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Great job on a rhyming acrostic! You went above and beyond! (Literally...considering theme!)
Corinthians 5:10
"For we must all appear before the judgment seat of Christ, so that each one may receive what is due for what he has done in the body, whether good or evil."
(There is no VIP exception!)
Karenina
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hey there my sweet Angel girl. I wonder if others appreciate your little humor as much as I do. Lol... I think we should have been sisters in the real world, because we are so much alike in so many ways. We do have the same sense of humor and I love that. I am glad you liked this acrostic. Yes, we all need to heed the call. Life is too short, but eternity is forever. We don't want to be on the wrong end of that. Thank you so much for the kind review and comments. Always so appreciated! Always thinking about you and will be talking soon, much to tell and much I want to hear. Love ya Honey!
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Likely most others think I'm the dork I am! (LOL)--- Oh well...I try!
I did enjoy your acrostic!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Very nice presentation. Very well written acrostic poem. Notes are not included. No syllable count being its an acrostic poem. The first letter of each sentence/line spells the title.
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Very nice presentation. Very well written acrostic poem. Notes are not included. No syllable count being its an acrostic poem. The first letter of each sentence/line spells the title.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hey Sweetie, thank you so much Rosemary as you always give such kind reviews. And yet I love your feedback too. I usually don't write in notes if the contest is already explained under the poem. But it was a fun one to do, just probably not the cheeriest of messages from me. Lol... Thanks again dear friend.
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent acrostic for the contest as well as a challenge to all who will read it. The two options are set out clearly without comprise. Additional rhyme is good. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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An excellent acrostic for the contest as well as a challenge to all who will read it. The two options are set out clearly without comprise. Additional rhyme is good. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Hi Wendy. Thank you for the kind comments for my Judgement
Acrostic poem. They are so much fun, but I can't help myself. Lol, I start anything without making a rhyme anymore. I did however, have to watch myself so when I talk to others I don't do the same thing. Lol....
Thanks again my sweet friend.
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, no truer words written than what I read here. One day will come when we shall behold Him and He will know us as we are known. "His" Good post. WELL SAID.
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Yes, no truer words written than what I read here. One day will come when we shall behold Him and He will know us as we are known. "His" Good post. WELL SAID.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Bob, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem for all of my friends hereI am very blessed with family and friends, as I count you as one of those blessings.
Thanks again, my dear friend'
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written bible acrostic. Nice overall presentation background and font. Breathtaking photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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This is a nicely written bible acrostic. Nice overall presentation background and font. Breathtaking photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Joanne, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem for all of my friends hereI am very blessed with family and friends, as I count you as one of those blessings.
Thanks again, my dear friend
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You are so welcome my friend 🙂
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your acrostic poem, Judgement Day, delivers a powerful reminder and message that Christian believers are compelled to experience such a day. Your poem presents this fact in a smooth flowing rhyme, while your artwork intensifies the message. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Your acrostic poem, Judgement Day, delivers a powerful reminder and message that Christian believers are compelled to experience such a day. Your poem presents this fact in a smooth flowing rhyme, while your artwork intensifies the message. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hi Lorraine, I am glad you liked my acrostic. Yes, we all need to heed the call. Life is too short, but eternity is forever. We don't want to be on the wrong end of that. Thank you so much for the kind review and comments. Always so appreciated!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was a beautiful presentation in all areas, Mystery
Author. The image was perfect. The formatting of lines
was awesome. I liked the extra large first letter to begin
each line and the use of the cursive type font. Your words
used to build the acrostic stood out nicely both in appearance
and meaning. Each line offered more information to develop
the true message. The use of rhymes was an added bonus.
Your words were well thought out, they weren't preachy, yet
poke to all in a non-judgmental way. I didn't matters if the
readers was a believer or not. The message covered everyone
in the end.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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This was a beautiful presentation in all areas, Mystery
Author. The image was perfect. The formatting of lines
was awesome. I liked the extra large first letter to begin
each line and the use of the cursive type font. Your words
used to build the acrostic stood out nicely both in appearance
and meaning. Each line offered more information to develop
the true message. The use of rhymes was an added bonus.
Your words were well thought out, they weren't preachy, yet
poke to all in a non-judgmental way. I didn't matters if the
readers was a believer or not. The message covered everyone
in the end.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Wow Jan, thank you so much for this wonderful review and comments. You are so thorough and you have no idea how much that means to me..i love everything you said. Thank you also for the awesome six stars. I am touched beyond words. You are the best and I thank you once again.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hi Raul, I am glad you liked this acrostic. Yes, we all need to heed the call. Life is too short, but eternity is forever. We don't want to be on the wrong end of that. Thank you so much for the kind review and comments. Always so appreciated!
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You're welcome!
