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The Deviled Egg War

Mayor judges town fair competitions.

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Comment from Wendy G
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Lovely story, unusual and humorous and with a great ending. Made with love - that's the real deal and all anyone can ask for. Well done.
Did you make yourself some after writing this?
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-May-2023


reply by the author on 08-May-2023
    Thanks, Wendy. I appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You were inspired by your craving here and I had a poached egg for lunch yesterday on a slice of potato bread covered with avocado, prawns and salad, it was delicious, hope you served devilled eggs for lunch? A fun write, much enjoyed Gretchen, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 08-May-2023
    Making them tomorrow as a matter of fact. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I've been thinking about them as well. LOL No problem here. My daughter nancy has 45 chickens and plenty of eggs, LOL
I do believe the Mayor made the right choice. All things are better when you add a little love. Well done Gretchen. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 07-May-2023
    Thank you. You said you wanted me to post more so I gave you a double shot tonight. Early Mother's day present. Lol. Have a great night and thank you. Gretchen
reply by nancy_e_davis on 07-May-2023
    I was delighted! Well done. Nancy:) xx
Comment from Jay Squires
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Awwww, this was so warm and fun. You're making me hungry for a batch of deviled eggs. I put them in my potato salad, but leave the yoke-fixing to the ladies. I do believe you are building a strong fanbase here.
Jay

 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 07-May-2023
    I shall practice my parade wave. Lol. Thanks, Jay. This was just the response I hoped for. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
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Talk about what goes around comes around, I love a great trip into irony thst gripped this delightful story Gretchen. This is most imaginative and leaves me in awe of your ability to pluck a great story out of the fires of inspiration, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 07-May-2023
    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I see me making deviled eggs in the not so distant future. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Ben Colder
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Good choice. Reminds me of Mayberry U.S.A. and the pickle contest. I can see the mayor and his smelly eggs. I love a good, deviled egg, with mustard. Good post.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 07-May-2023
    I'm a mustard lover as well. Nothing over the top. Can't stand when someone tries to reinvent the egg wheel. Lol. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from jessizero
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This was a sweet and funny story. The descriptions of the eggs were especially hilarious. I am not an egg fan, either. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 07-May-2023
    I love a plain deviled egg. Nothing fancy. Seen one too many people ruin it. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen