Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

A very nice way of capturing a feeling in few words. I like how you have the beam of sunlight being the smile of the person you love. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you so much for your kind review, Andrea!!!

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Dear Poet, what a lovely
and romantic morning poem.
Quite impressive senryu. My
very best wishes and warmest regards for the contest. Blessings to you and
yours. ~

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 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

As always, Thank you Regina, for your kind words!!!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Nothing warms us like a genuine smile. Nothing blesses our morning more then the smile of someone we love and who loves us. You capture this moment beautifully.

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 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thanks so much Ginda, for the encouraging feedback!!!