Birthdays
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Comment from MissMerri
Love this cute poem, so carefully written and presented to honor another FanStorian birthday. You are so good at these poems Debi. I always enjoy learning more about other writers on the site. Thank you so much for doing this. Thank you too, for the warning in your author notes. I will remember that.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Love this cute poem, so carefully written and presented to honor another FanStorian birthday. You are so good at these poems Debi. I always enjoy learning more about other writers on the site. Thank you so much for doing this. Thank you too, for the warning in your author notes. I will remember that.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Adonna, Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday
Comment from Wendy G
Well done - you have composed a very nice poem for Shari and her family for Shari's birthday. She will enjoy this a lot, I am sure. I join in sending her birthday wishes.
Wendy
Typo: "would pass a way (away)"
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Well done - you have composed a very nice poem for Shari and her family for Shari's birthday. She will enjoy this a lot, I am sure. I join in sending her birthday wishes.
Wendy
Typo: "would pass a way (away)"
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Wendy,Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday. Thanks too for the feedback!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I can't say enough about this poem. The story was very well written, the rhymes were right on. Very interesting, an entire life in a poem. The picture was great and the different colors of the font were perfect. Very good Debbie, as usual. Your friend, Willie.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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I can't say enough about this poem. The story was very well written, the rhymes were right on. Very interesting, an entire life in a poem. The picture was great and the different colors of the font were perfect. Very good Debbie, as usual. Your friend, Willie.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Thank you so very much Willie. You are the greatest. I so appreciate your kind comments and the sweet things for Shari too. I really appreciate the honor of the six stars too. Now I will not be happy until I know the date of your birthday. Please. I have a dandy prepared for you lol.... thanks again my dear friend.
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Drbi. My birthday dates back to the age of dinosaurs, 12.13.37. Willie
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Thank you so much Willie
I have it in my birthday list now.
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And you aren't that old.
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You are a character.
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Lol
Comment from Mary Vigasin
The coloring and presentation has the eye of an artist. A very delightful "birthday card" introducing Shari as a writer and person.
I am sure this birthday gift will also bring her new fans.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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The coloring and presentation has the eye of an artist. A very delightful "birthday card" introducing Shari as a writer and person.
I am sure this birthday gift will also bring her new fans.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Me again Mary, Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a delightful poem for Shari, giving us the highlights of her life. I hope she had a wonderful birthday. Thank you for sharing the note about composing our work somewhere. I always write in Word and then copy and paste it to Fan Story.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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This is a delightful poem for Shari, giving us the highlights of her life. I hope she had a wonderful birthday. Thank you for sharing the note about composing our work somewhere. I always write in Word and then copy and paste it to Fan Story.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Anne, Thanks for this kind review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday
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You are welcome, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
I just finished reading the ending of Shari's latest script and will now go to her profile to wish her a happy birthday, thanks to you. Your poem gives us lots of interesting information. I didn't know Shari lives in the same state as me. I really like your Merry-go-Rhyme style.
Haha! I watched every cat sing. Very funny and cute.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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I just finished reading the ending of Shari's latest script and will now go to her profile to wish her a happy birthday, thanks to you. Your poem gives us lots of interesting information. I didn't know Shari lives in the same state as me. I really like your Merry-go-Rhyme style.
Haha! I watched every cat sing. Very funny and cute.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Lorraine, Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday
That is so funny that you watched those silly cats! Haha!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
First of all, the color scheme and image
invoke a sense of fire. Of course, this birthday
You did a great job, Debi, giving readers info
on Shari. Your lines flowed smoothly with great
details and rhymes which created great imagery.
Shari has had a life jammed packed with events.
I knew she wrote great scripts, but not about the
other writing. I didn't know about the singing and
acting. I learned about her children's lives and
families. I did know about Frank and his passing.
The little kitties in the video were precious.
Thanks for sharing your big heart to make a member
fee special on their day, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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First of all, the color scheme and image
invoke a sense of fire. Of course, this birthday
You did a great job, Debi, giving readers info
on Shari. Your lines flowed smoothly with great
details and rhymes which created great imagery.
Shari has had a life jammed packed with events.
I knew she wrote great scripts, but not about the
other writing. I didn't know about the singing and
acting. I learned about her children's lives and
families. I did know about Frank and his passing.
The little kitties in the video were precious.
Thanks for sharing your big heart to make a member
fee special on their day, Jan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday. Thanks too Jan for the six stars. You are always sogracious!
Comment from royowen
I love Shari, she's a fabulous writer and now good friend. And I'm glad you are attending to honouring the wonderful members we enjoy on fanstory, Debi, while I try to take care of business, you are like a precious gem Debi, thank you, thank you for this. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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I love Shari, she's a fabulous writer and now good friend. And I'm glad you are attending to honouring the wonderful members we enjoy on fanstory, Debi, while I try to take care of business, you are like a precious gem Debi, thank you, thank you for this. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Roy, Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday
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Well done
Comment from mermaids
I have following Shari since I have been on Fanstory, she is one of the first to support my work. Her writing is so entertaining and your poem is wonderful. You capture Shari's life perfectly in your words.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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I have following Shari since I have been on Fanstory, she is one of the first to support my work. Her writing is so entertaining and your poem is wonderful. You capture Shari's life perfectly in your words.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday, you have been such a kind friend and reviewer for so long so do I have your birthdate?
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My birthday is February 17. Elaine
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Elaine, I got it in my list now. Thanks so very much!! Debi
Any chance that you are a teacher of anything? We are following up my post from yesterday with anyone who has taught kids in anything and wanting to know what they taught whether school or Sunday school? Or anything else. It is going to be called., ?Thank you for serving?our youth?
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Elaine, I got it in my list now. Thanks so very much!! Debi
Any chance that you are a teacher of anything? We are following up my post from yesterday with anyone who has taught kids in anything and wanting to know what they taught whether school or Sunday school? Or anything else. It is going to be called., ?Thank you for serving?our youth?
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My goal in life was to be a teacher and that did happen. I taught Sunday school for several years. I had a second job after I worked as nurse, teaching drunk driving classes. The classes focused on changing one's behavior regarding drinking and driving.
Comment from w.j.debi
This a wonderful tribute to Shari. I admire her work. She's written some clever stories. I especially like her narrative voice. It feels like you are sitting across from her enjoying a conversation over coffee.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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This a wonderful tribute to Shari. I admire her work. She's written some clever stories. I especially like her narrative voice. It feels like you are sitting across from her enjoying a conversation over coffee.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Debi ' Thanks for this awesome review and lovely comments for shari and her poem. I know she will enjoy reading all the kind comments and wishes for her birthday