Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think apprehension very much takes a front seat when one gets married, it always seems to be a little bit of a gamble, but at least our bride-to-be approached it positively, the rest of my life, said she, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : On the cloth(e)s line

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. I wil fix that one typo.

reply by royowen on 08-Jul-2023

Well done

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A very nice thoughtful moment as the wedding is about to begin, and the typical nerves of a young bride. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Typo: clothes-line (not cloths)
I think they are usually called Gerbera daisies.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. I will fix both of the issues you pointed out. Have a blessed day.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This flash fiction story, The Bride, describes the finery of the brides attire, as well as the location and all the many sights on this wonderful day. I can only correct the actress's name in your movie reference. It was Julia Roberts.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. I will fix the actress's name. Have a blessed day.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am glad this girl took the plunge and did not run away, we have to move on in life and marriage isn't that scary if the couple can compromise, I enjoyed your flash fiction here, an uplifting story, love the description of her dress too, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading and renewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

It looks like the one calm moment between all the preparation and the coming change to her life. All eyes will be on her in a moment so she reviews the dress, the hair, the flowers, her nervous doubts and hopes about this commitment. Suddenly, it is time...
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and very well written flash fiction story about how a bride to be might be thinking as she is getting ready to walk down the aisle. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.

reply by Teri7 on 07-Jul-2023

you are so welcome! Blessings, Teri