Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, Butterflies in Heaven, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of these gossamer insects that float about and make us revere nature.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like the theme and words you've chosen.
I could relate to butterflies being angelic. My mom definitely visits me in that way because when she passed a butterfly kissed my cheek. Beautifully presented. Best wishes!Alexandra


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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Lovely economical use of words, including metaphor, and even a sort of half-rhyme. Excellent accompanying photo too. Well done and good luck in the competition.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you so much