Part One - Blind Awareness
Beep beep beep beep19 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Didn't see the pun arriving, but then you say it isn't one so what would you call it.
A fun read, which no one could know what was seen until near the end.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Didn't see the pun arriving, but then you say it isn't one so what would you call it.
A fun read, which no one could know what was seen until near the end.
Well done.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Tom.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well I'm definitely up for reading the next part! Love all your dialogue here, giving great pace to the story and exuding bags of character and mischief! I wondered if you meant 'burst' in line "As quirky type eighth graders...." Great story with huge potential I think:) Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Well I'm definitely up for reading the next part! Love all your dialogue here, giving great pace to the story and exuding bags of character and mischief! I wondered if you meant 'burst' in line "As quirky type eighth graders...." Great story with huge potential I think:) Take care Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Pressure is on for part 2?
Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Let the games begin here John and I suspect things are going to be a little surprising in your next post! A fun introduction to this alien story John, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Let the games begin here John and I suspect things are going to be a little surprising in your next post! A fun introduction to this alien story John, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. Always appreciate you stopping to read.
John
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying your story. The eighth grade kids are definitely typical. I remember my own and I tried practice teaching eighth graders. I've heard of beep baseball. Aparently this is being played withe sighted people who are blindfolded. I'd think they'd be falling all over the place.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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I'm enjoying your story. The eighth grade kids are definitely typical. I remember my own and I tried practice teaching eighth graders. I've heard of beep baseball. Aparently this is being played withe sighted people who are blindfolded. I'd think they'd be falling all over the place.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Beth.
I appreciate your time!
John
Comment from royowen
We Actually have blind cricket, at which the balls have bells in them, so the blind can hear the balls a judge where it is on the pitch, so you can strike it, I love this John , this is a very clever work, you actually had me going there. Beautifully wrutten, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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We Actually have blind cricket, at which the balls have bells in them, so the blind can hear the balls a judge where it is on the pitch, so you can strike it, I love this John , this is a very clever work, you actually had me going there. Beautifully wrutten, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Awesome, blind cricket.
I?ll have to check that out.
Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
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It is indeed
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It is indeed
Comment from Jim Wile
Now this is cool, John. You've got me wondering: is Beep Baseball such a thing or is it an invention of yours? Either way, I'm dying to know how the blind could possibly play baseball. I guess if there's a will, and someone clever enough to make it work, there's a way. I guess we'll see in part 2. - Jim
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Now this is cool, John. You've got me wondering: is Beep Baseball such a thing or is it an invention of yours? Either way, I'm dying to know how the blind could possibly play baseball. I guess if there's a will, and someone clever enough to make it work, there's a way. I guess we'll see in part 2. - Jim
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Beep baseball is for real, including its own World Series.
Thank you, Jim.
Cheers, John
Comment from Ben Colder
Beans, Beans, good for your heart the more you eat them the better you feel, that's why you should eat beans at every meal. The other works on you too. Goods one John . Typical kids.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Beans, Beans, good for your heart the more you eat them the better you feel, that's why you should eat beans at every meal. The other works on you too. Goods one John . Typical kids.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Ben.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an incredible piece of work, so dynamic and engaging. Good job! I loved how each kid had a name and a distinct personality, in such a short story. And baseball for the blind? Who even thinks of that? Your definitely cutting edge (no pun intended nor written lol). This definitely put me in a good mood. Thanks!
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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This is an incredible piece of work, so dynamic and engaging. Good job! I loved how each kid had a name and a distinct personality, in such a short story. And baseball for the blind? Who even thinks of that? Your definitely cutting edge (no pun intended nor written lol). This definitely put me in a good mood. Thanks!
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Alexandra, thank you for the great review.
Glad you smiled with it.
John
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Interesting concept. Was not expecting that. Did they play????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Karen
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Interesting concept. Was not expecting that. Did they play????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Karen
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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That will be in part two.
Beep baseball is a real event played across the country.
Thanks for reading.
John
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U R welcome Karen
