Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your poem about life- excellent picture presentation to go along with the poem- the theme is very insightful- a reality check showing that the truths we perceive through our minds are in fact totally dependent on our physical being - nice job!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Perfect free verse. No worries there. Well done. Love the metaphor you employ here and trace throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing this with us. Now do more!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I'm no expert when it comes to free verse. But I love these sentiments of living with grace and gratitude. Continue unwrapping your talents! You are a gifted poet.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you for your most encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Jamison Brown

Exceptional

What a blessing to be so eloquently reminded of what we have been given.

"a daily gift", "I could not buy", "slowly I must unwrap"

An inspirational message with deep meaning, skillfully written and artfully presented. Simply exceptional. - Jamison

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Wow! thank you so very much, I am so happy with the response for this write, I am skeptical no more, a very encouraging review, many thanks, as always very much appreciated,****kahpot

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent free verse poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you Alexandra, for your most encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

The thing I love about free verse is the natural flow of the author's thoughts and emotions and I think you've achieved that in this one. I love the appreciation of each day in this one kahpot. Beautifully done,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

"The thing I love about free verse is the natural flow of the author's thoughts and emotions" I find these words to be so very helpful, in my learning of this form of poetry, Thank you for you wonderful and very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This free verse, Thank You For, is well staged with proper cuts and placements of thoughts. Life is appreciated:
--could not buy it
--do not care to sell it
--it's a daily gift

Nice.

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you Bill, so very encouraging, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a great attitude! We all need to savor life and daily "unwrap it slowly" and remember that every day that we are given is indeed a gift to be grateful to the Lord for.

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot