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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi,
Glad to hear you are out of the hospital. Hope the meds are treating you better. Faith always gives you a better view of life. You can hear God's whisper in any part of nature, if you try.
I also find writing cathartic and rain soothing, as long as there is no loud thunder.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest,
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
Hi Debi,
Glad to hear you are out of the hospital. Hope the meds are treating you better. Faith always gives you a better view of life. You can hear God's whisper in any part of nature, if you try.
I also find writing cathartic and rain soothing, as long as there is no loud thunder.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest,
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Hi Joan,lol, I really didn't have anything in mind except an arrogant Dr at Mayo Clinic that must have thought that women should not be in touch with their own bodies and I soon let him know that nothing goes in my mouth or gets injected into me until I know what it is, what it is for and how much damage it can do. So any reviews that I had were not thought about (even tho there have been a few) but I just had all arrogant men in mind. Hahaha!
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That?s understandable, Debi.
Of course you were right.
Joan
Comment from Gina Schneller
Good morning fellow writer! I enjoyed your poem very much! It is so beautifully written, it has a peaceful and calming way. Soothing. I also love the sound of rain.... You use descriptive words that paint a clear picture. I can feel your emotions through your words. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey! God Bless!
Good morning fellow writer! I enjoyed your poem very much! It is so beautifully written, it has a peaceful and calming way. Soothing. I also love the sound of rain.... You use descriptive words that paint a clear picture. I can feel your emotions through your words. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey! God Bless!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
Comment from Jane Jane King
Very lovely and heartfelt poem. And I agree...there is something so comforting about rain...you know the saying right as rain. Have you been ill? I hope not but if so I hope you feel better soon. God bless!!!
Very lovely and heartfelt poem. And I agree...there is something so comforting about rain...you know the saying right as rain. Have you been ill? I hope not but if so I hope you feel better soon. God bless!!!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
Comment from Jim Wile
Oh, wow! How beautiful, Debi. I'm glad that you can at least have your poetry as a distraction from your pain. I'm sure it helps your overall mood. This was a very good poem too.
Please know that we are all rooting for you here at FanStory. You are such a good person and a wonderful friend to so many, and we wish you and your family only the best as our thoughts and prayers are with you. - Your friend, Jim
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
Oh, wow! How beautiful, Debi. I'm glad that you can at least have your poetry as a distraction from your pain. I'm sure it helps your overall mood. This was a very good poem too.
Please know that we are all rooting for you here at FanStory. You are such a good person and a wonderful friend to so many, and we wish you and your family only the best as our thoughts and prayers are with you. - Your friend, Jim
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Jim I can't thank you enough for this compassionate and caring review and kind words. You are such a dear friend and I appreciate this and the gracious six stars too, my dear friend. The out pour of prayers has made such a difference and I thank you again.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautiful and calming poem. The sound of rain brings not only calm but a sense of renewal and healing. Blessings and prayers to you.
You know you have many friends here thinking of you and wishing you a well.
Blessings,
Mary
A beautiful and calming poem. The sound of rain brings not only calm but a sense of renewal and healing. Blessings and prayers to you.
You know you have many friends here thinking of you and wishing you a well.
Blessings,
Mary
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
Comment from mermaids
Nature often provides us with relief and rain can certainly do that. I like the feeling of the rain as a healing element. I have facilitated therapy poetry groups in the past and your words are in that realm. Creative lines and verses, yet healing and feeling good come forth. You give me food for thought.
Nature often provides us with relief and rain can certainly do that. I like the feeling of the rain as a healing element. I have facilitated therapy poetry groups in the past and your words are in that realm. Creative lines and verses, yet healing and feeling good come forth. You give me food for thought.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
Comment from Raul1
I like your poem and I bet it took a long time to write like this. It is well written. Exceptional work! I see no mistakes at all. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
I like your poem and I bet it took a long time to write like this. It is well written. Exceptional work! I see no mistakes at all. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Raul, I can't thank you enough for this compassionate and caring review and kind words. You are such a dear friend and I appreciate this and the gracious six stars too, my dear friend. The out pour of prayers has made such a difference and I thank you again.
Comment from aryr
Rain is so calm and peaceful and my prayers and that of my friend's, so you heal, Debi. Raining promote healing thoughts. I loved the picture. Blessings for healing. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
Rain is so calm and peaceful and my prayers and that of my friend's, so you heal, Debi. Raining promote healing thoughts. I loved the picture. Blessings for healing. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Oh Ali, right now those hugs feel pretty good too as this has been a very scary ordeal with the lupus circling like sharks to steal the last of the organs it doesn't already have control over.
I can't thank you enough for this compassionate and caring review and kind words. You are such a dear friend and I appreciate this and the gracious six stars too, my dear friend. The out pour of prayers has made such a difference and I thank you again.
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I aim to please, Debi.
Comment from royowen
It is a privilege to pray for people isn't it? And it is easy to pray for those one loves, so it's easy to pray for you Debi, you are a living, berating example of God's lovel we are only shadows that reflect His love, and you are a bright, shiny reflection, Debi, bless you and get well, blessings Roy
It is a privilege to pray for people isn't it? And it is easy to pray for those one loves, so it's easy to pray for you Debi, you are a living, berating example of God's lovel we are only shadows that reflect His love, and you are a bright, shiny reflection, Debi, bless you and get well, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm glad God sends His healing, cleansing, peaceful rain. There are many people praying for your healing and recovery, and God hears each and every prayer. Even through your health challenges, you are loving and caring and an inspiration to others. I'm glad you are returning home. My thoughts and prayers remain with you.
Enjoy the rain. It represents the blessings of growth, new life and replenishing, as God showers you with His Spirit to guide and comfort. He has given His angels charge over you bringing healing to every fiber of your being, and restoring your body with every breath you breathe and every story and poem you write. In the name of Jesus, you are richly blessed. Amen.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
I'm glad God sends His healing, cleansing, peaceful rain. There are many people praying for your healing and recovery, and God hears each and every prayer. Even through your health challenges, you are loving and caring and an inspiration to others. I'm glad you are returning home. My thoughts and prayers remain with you.
Enjoy the rain. It represents the blessings of growth, new life and replenishing, as God showers you with His Spirit to guide and comfort. He has given His angels charge over you bringing healing to every fiber of your being, and restoring your body with every breath you breathe and every story and poem you write. In the name of Jesus, you are richly blessed. Amen.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Oh Lorraine, thank you with all my heart. This has been a very scary ordeal with the lupus circling like sharks to steal the last of the organs it doesn't already have control over.
I can't thank you enough for this compassionate and caring review and kind words. You are such a dear friend and I appreciate this and the gracious six stars too, my dear friend. The out pour of prayers has made such a difference and I thank you again.