The Saga of Procrastination
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Hi Iza,
A powerful post.
Did you mean (pond) here?
(. . . across the (pond) are electing/slamming)
love this line:
(I end up buried under the same Muprhy Law...)
Did you mean (it's) here in your last line Iza?
(to see all I can before (it's) gone!)
I liked your forthright words here, love Dolly x
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Hi Iza,
A powerful post.
Did you mean (pond) here?
(. . . across the (pond) are electing/slamming)
love this line:
(I end up buried under the same Muprhy Law...)
Did you mean (it's) here in your last line Iza?
(to see all I can before (it's) gone!)
I liked your forthright words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
Comment from BethShelby
Most of the time it is nice to have a alter ego. When you live alone you need someone to talk to besides the cats, but would hate to have one that wouldn't let me sleep. She will be going with you on that trip. Tell her to cool it an enjoyed it with you while it is still here.
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Most of the time it is nice to have a alter ego. When you live alone you need someone to talk to besides the cats, but would hate to have one that wouldn't let me sleep. She will be going with you on that trip. Tell her to cool it an enjoyed it with you while it is still here.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
Comment from lyenochka
You really should work for a travel agency that pays you to travel! I know that's your most favorite thing to do. I can imagine you as a tour guide but you would love to tour so many places not just the same one.
Our neighbors across the pound (pond?)
earthquake in Marocco (Morocco)
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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You really should work for a travel agency that pays you to travel! I know that's your most favorite thing to do. I can imagine you as a tour guide but you would love to tour so many places not just the same one.
Our neighbors across the pound (pond?)
earthquake in Marocco (Morocco)
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Helen for your kind review