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A Particular Friendship

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We meet Lizzy who has just come out of the convent

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Sometimes remembering can bring release from horror and life can go on without being crippled with secrets untold. Your willow is a wonderful repository of all those histories. This is a lovely poem a little like The Wishing Tree by Shel Silberstein.

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    This is a lovely review. Thank you
Comment from patcelaw
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I truly did enjoy listening to this lovely poem. It is hard to believe so many times little children believe things about themselves that are just not true. I wish you the very best for the coming holidays. God bless and have a good night. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
    How lovely a review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Loved your Willow poem. And it reminds me of the Willow character in the Be Wee with Bea books. It's wonderful that you can use the pain and trauma of your own life experiences to create a path to healing for others.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
    How lovely a review
reply by lyenochka on 27-Nov-2023
    Did you get the computer working okay now? 💞
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    yes, my new one is connected to everything now...phew.