Hope
Light in the Dark40 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Sometimes that is all we have - hope and the power of prayers. And God knows we need them these days! Thank you for sharing your inspirational words.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Sometimes that is all we have - hope and the power of prayers. And God knows we need them these days! Thank you for sharing your inspirational words.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, June! Your kindness and support are greatly appreciated. Take care Debbie
Comment from karenina
So true. So devastating what is happening. God Bless the innocent children! Peace please! We've done war.
Nobody wins...
One side loses more than the other.
We never learn!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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So true. So devastating what is happening. God Bless the innocent children! Peace please! We've done war.
Nobody wins...
One side loses more than the other.
We never learn!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Karenina! As ever, your kindness and support are greatly appreciated. Take care Debbie
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You're welcome, Debbie.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's so pretty and so poignant a message as well. Tough to do with so little space to do it when you have managed beautifully! It's a lovely poem more than worthy of submission. I'm glad you have shared it with all of us. Thank you so much. Have a great night!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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That's so pretty and so poignant a message as well. Tough to do with so little space to do it when you have managed beautifully! It's a lovely poem more than worthy of submission. I'm glad you have shared it with all of us. Thank you so much. Have a great night!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Lea! Your lovely words are greatly appreciated. Debbie
Comment from Aussie
"Prayer is the World's greatest wireless connection." I agree with your sentiments and do light a candle in the dark. Jesus said, "I am the Light of the World." We are the impatient humans wanting Him to intervene and stop the wars. He gave us free choice, some movers and shakers will join hands and put a stop to the carnage. Well done, best wishes in the writing prompt. K xx
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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"Prayer is the World's greatest wireless connection." I agree with your sentiments and do light a candle in the dark. Jesus said, "I am the Light of the World." We are the impatient humans wanting Him to intervene and stop the wars. He gave us free choice, some movers and shakers will join hands and put a stop to the carnage. Well done, best wishes in the writing prompt. K xx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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You're spoiling me now, Kay! Another wonderful review and thoughts which I deeply appreciate. Thank you so much! Debbie
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a wonderful and powerful piece that encourages the reader to have faith and believe. Sometimes hope is all we have and it can be the strongest power to motivate.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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This is a wonderful and powerful piece that encourages the reader to have faith and believe. Sometimes hope is all we have and it can be the strongest power to motivate.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you again, Mia! Your kindness and support are appreciated. Debbie
Comment from John Ciarmello
Yes, this is short and beautiful, from photo to lyrics.
It sickens all of us to watch this happen to the innocent people of those countries.
We can only share our feelings in these beautiful phrases and poems as helplessness builds in our hearts and minds. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Yes, this is short and beautiful, from photo to lyrics.
It sickens all of us to watch this happen to the innocent people of those countries.
We can only share our feelings in these beautiful phrases and poems as helplessness builds in our hearts and minds. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, John, for such a kind review! Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Debbie
Comment from Ric Myworld
Hope and prayer likely the only chance, as our world seems to be coming apart at the seams. Regard for human lives at an all time low, even on the streets. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hope and prayer likely the only chance, as our world seems to be coming apart at the seams. Regard for human lives at an all time low, even on the streets. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Ric, for your kind review and thoughts! Debbie
Comment from Yusita
Ah, such a lovely little poem that evokes peace and hope. All three lines rhyme perfectly and the message is profound... "that hope will light the way". Loved this. What is hope but light in darkness?
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Ah, such a lovely little poem that evokes peace and hope. All three lines rhyme perfectly and the message is profound... "that hope will light the way". Loved this. What is hope but light in darkness?
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Yusita, for your kind review and thoughts, much appreciated! Debbie
Comment from Janis M.
An excellent submission for the contest. It fits the criteria and I don't see any grammar or punctuation issues. I think it is a common topic right now and may be a bit redundant in that aspect, but other wise a good entry.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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An excellent submission for the contest. It fits the criteria and I don't see any grammar or punctuation issues. I think it is a common topic right now and may be a bit redundant in that aspect, but other wise a good entry.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Janis, for your kind review and thoughts! Debbie
Comment from JSD
A sweet little poem that says a great deal that is important to us, in a mere twelve syllables. Good light and dark imagery and a lovely picture. Well done and good luck with this.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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A sweet little poem that says a great deal that is important to us, in a mere twelve syllables. Good light and dark imagery and a lovely picture. Well done and good luck with this.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for this kind review!
