Comment from Navada

Excellent

Ha! I really like this concept and the visual image is a brilliant way to cement the general idea. Increasingly, privacy is becoming less and less achievable in our modern society. Good luck for the contest!

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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

There's a meme that reads: I'm grateful every day for the fact that, because there were no cell phones when I was growing up, there is no proof of all the trouble I made.

Thanks for this really nice review.

reply by Navada on 11-Dec-2023

Absolutely! My friends and I constantly give thanks that we weren't exposed to social media as teenagers.

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

I'm fascinated when I'm in, say, Starbucks and see a table full of teens, just sitting there, texting. I think, "Are you texting each OTHER? Do you realize you could be TALKING to one another?" So baffling to me.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good descriptive words and rhyme.
-This person seems to have a heads up
on the situation and is letting the other
person know it.
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thanks very much for this organized, in-depth review!

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Dec-2023

You are very welcome.