Winter wonderland
Shimmering blanket of white covers the earth14 total reviews
Comment from Austin Yu
The image you attached to the poem, along with your short description of how it looks like crystals, is very nice. I also like the 3 rhyming words you provided. Nice work
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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The image you attached to the poem, along with your short description of how it looks like crystals, is very nice. I also like the 3 rhyming words you provided. Nice work
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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May I ask why it?s average and you gave me 3 stars
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It was a bit short, and didn't give the reader much imagination. When writing a short poem, you need to write it in a way that is 10% words, 90% thought. Your job is to allow the reader to envision what you've wrote, not tell the reader directly. For example, you could've described snow as "frozen clouds." Overall it was strong!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest, yes, you've fulfilled all the requirements for this particular, a great current them, a good chance in this, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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This is an excellent entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest, yes, you've fulfilled all the requirements for this particular, a great current them, a good chance in this, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from JSD
Well done for achieving the rhymes here and satisfying the prompt effectively. Delightful description that is most enjoyable. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Well done for achieving the rhymes here and satisfying the prompt effectively. Delightful description that is most enjoyable. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Yusita
This is brilliant! I don't know how you did it with such a limited number of syllables, but you did it! "Winter crystalline show" is just beautiful... beautiful words and beautiful imagery.
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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This is brilliant! I don't know how you did it with such a limited number of syllables, but you did it! "Winter crystalline show" is just beautiful... beautiful words and beautiful imagery.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much