Passion's Flames
The fiery spark of love12 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good poem that you have written for the contest with using a metaphor for fire. I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your presentation is wonderful and I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
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This is a very good poem that you have written for the contest with using a metaphor for fire. I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your presentation is wonderful and I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
Comment from Janis M.
Well done. I think you were able to get multiple angles of one idea communicated thoroughly in a few syllables. From beginning to end there is a beginning statement and a conclusion for the reader to draw from and think on.
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Well done. I think you were able to get multiple angles of one idea communicated thoroughly in a few syllables. From beginning to end there is a beginning statement and a conclusion for the reader to draw from and think on.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
