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Comment from Sally Law
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I completely agree, Mermaids. I loved your poems and treasured thoughts of Christmas. 24/7 and 365! Amen! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you for taking time to read and review. I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine
reply by Sally Law on 21-Jan-2024
    Most welcome. My pleasure as always.
    Sal xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a commendable post as you bring happiness to your words here, the joy of faith brings that inner happiness to those who believe, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you and Have a Happy New Year. Love, Elaine
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes

Alex

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Yusita
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This is a profound and reflective piece that reminds us that the things we do for or on Christmas should really be for the entire year, not just one day. The meaning behind Christmas should be carried throughout our lives during the whole year.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I truly enjoyed your poem. How true are your words! The picture fits well with the poem. I loved it. Well done. Imagine what our world would be like if everyone treated every day like Christmas

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Navada
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You are absolutely right. This Christmas was the first one I'd spent alone as I'd hurt my back and couldn't drive. I was also reminded of long lost family members on the day, so your point about it being a tough time of year is correct, but the more important point is the true meaning of the season as you highlighted. Just one little spag error - the second breathe in your third stanza. Lovely and thought-provoking writing. :)

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
    Yes, this year was not an easy Christmas, my family has moved to another state but I try to remain positive. Thanks for reading and pointing out the error. Elaine