A Particular Friendship
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "A Convent Kitchen"We meet Lizzy who has just come out of the convent
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Comment from Aiona
Fascinating section of your book. Especially the part about the three levels of the brain. I didn't see any typos. I was too busy reading, if there were any. I can't help but wonder about the "tuna wiggle" recipe. And the two disparate cookie recipes you both followed. Is there a cookbook at the end of the story?
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Fascinating section of your book. Especially the part about the three levels of the brain. I didn't see any typos. I was too busy reading, if there were any. I can't help but wonder about the "tuna wiggle" recipe. And the two disparate cookie recipes you both followed. Is there a cookbook at the end of the story?
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your funny review That would be a good thing to have a recipe of all the things The next chapter has another horrible situation with donuts so I could give you a spoiler, unless you want to wait for the next chapter...lol
