Loose Ends
A distressing start to a Sunday morning11 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A well told story here! This threw the reader in at the deep end and kept us hooked all the way through. I enjoyed the humour of counting the demands and found the dialogue excellent and credible. In short, this worked well for me with a surprise ending, always welcome. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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A well told story here! This threw the reader in at the deep end and kept us hooked all the way through. I enjoyed the humour of counting the demands and found the dialogue excellent and credible. In short, this worked well for me with a surprise ending, always welcome. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thanks, Debbie, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
