Pop The Cherry
A saga of epic proportions and nonsensical merriment.26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Great story! I consider it an honor to be name dropped... You put some serious thought into this madcap caper!
I signed on to enter this one...(very rare!)--
But lucky me! I got to read this one, which feels like a winner...and hang out (by name) with a bunch of great members!
(Not to mention this will be the only time I've n the history of time that
"....Karenina, and her Triple D's." will EVER be imagined,much less written in the story!)
I can't kill Karen...
But I can vote for your plan!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Great story! I consider it an honor to be name dropped... You put some serious thought into this madcap caper!
I signed on to enter this one...(very rare!)--
But lucky me! I got to read this one, which feels like a winner...and hang out (by name) with a bunch of great members!
(Not to mention this will be the only time I've n the history of time that
"....Karenina, and her Triple D's." will EVER be imagined,much less written in the story!)
I can't kill Karen...
But I can vote for your plan!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Ha! Glad you enjoyed it. Couldn?t ask folks for permission as it was blind. The only one who got upset was Tom, so I switched him out. Glad this finally started. Geesh.
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Originality was numero uno!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I take what I am reading here as a synopsis of characters you have met on Fanstory, and that the targeted character might be me or someone that needs to be put down like an animal whose reviews may burn another partner in crime.
I have no idea, but if you were going for silly, you hit a triple.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I take what I am reading here as a synopsis of characters you have met on Fanstory, and that the targeted character might be me or someone that needs to be put down like an animal whose reviews may burn another partner in crime.
I have no idea, but if you were going for silly, you hit a triple.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I was going for silly, Sir Tom. Some say I hit a bases loaded homer. Ha! And yes it is you, as you are one of my favorite people on FS. Yes. Very silly indeed. Borderline nonsensical.
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Me. Unique. Annoying. Clairvoyant. ... ok I threw that in for a laugh, just like my quote about hitting a triple when everyone else would have homered you. Have a great day.
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My apologies, Tom.
Comment from Begin Again
I was saving these glorious stars for something that knocked my socks off...I laughed ridiculously too hard and too long, but I loved seeing some of my favorite people pop off the page. How awesome! Entertaining like a Hollywood Movie night. I loved it! I wish yu luck in the contest, but I doubt you need it. Four Aces!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I was saving these glorious stars for something that knocked my socks off...I laughed ridiculously too hard and too long, but I loved seeing some of my favorite people pop off the page. How awesome! Entertaining like a Hollywood Movie night. I loved it! I wish yu luck in the contest, but I doubt you need it. Four Aces!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Yah! This is my first six star from you! It means a lot to me as you are very perceptive. I think this one is doing well against some stiff competition. Have a blessed day! You made mine!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry was hilarious and very creative. I couldn't stop laughing. Thank you for sharing this with us.
"The Cherry's not on it, Boss." Tom's voice sounded hollow over the phone. (Boss,")
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This contest entry was hilarious and very creative. I couldn't stop laughing. Thank you for sharing this with us.
"The Cherry's not on it, Boss." Tom's voice sounded hollow over the phone. (Boss,")
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I didn?t think you would mind me name dropping you. You aren?t easily offended. One person got upset, so I switched him out. Other than that, I think this will do well.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
And here I thought I was going to survive.
There's always room for Jello. - My breath was bated waiting for this line.
Where I came from, popping the cherry meant only one thing, somewhat loosely connected to stroking Jello.
Good luck in the contest, but I don't know about votes from murdered voters. (smiley face here)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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And here I thought I was going to survive.
There's always room for Jello. - My breath was bated waiting for this line.
Where I came from, popping the cherry meant only one thing, somewhat loosely connected to stroking Jello.
Good luck in the contest, but I don't know about votes from murdered voters. (smiley face here)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Glad you were okay with me using and abusing you. I?m pretty sure ghost can vote. I?m certain vampires can. But not werewolves. Cause they don?t have fingers.
Comment from Navada
This is absolute gold!! I'm sure a legion of FS writers will love it and will particularly enjoy all the inside jokes. The only thing I'm a bit sad about is that poor Jello must have been killed in the explosion as well! :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is absolute gold!! I'm sure a legion of FS writers will love it and will particularly enjoy all the inside jokes. The only thing I'm a bit sad about is that poor Jello must have been killed in the explosion as well! :)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks Navada. This was a fun contest. I think it will play well with my fellow Fanstorians.
Comment from Ric Myworld
ROFL! Well, what a great way to start off the day with this fun, humorous, and entertaining farce. A whole of time and imagination at work here. I enjoyed it immensely. Wish I had a six. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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ROFL! Well, what a great way to start off the day with this fun, humorous, and entertaining farce. A whole of time and imagination at work here. I enjoyed it immensely. Wish I had a six. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Ric. Glad you didn?t mind me name dropping you. All in good fun! Glad this thing finally started. Felt like forever!
Comment from Terry Broxson
It certainly takes great creativity to come up with so many one liners that are funny and you have aced the test. Killing everyone left at the end did seem fitting. It was at that point I knew Ric had not written this amusing story...because Tucker never dies. Very well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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It certainly takes great creativity to come up with so many one liners that are funny and you have aced the test. Killing everyone left at the end did seem fitting. It was at that point I knew Ric had not written this amusing story...because Tucker never dies. Very well done. Terry.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Terry! There are several great entries, but I think this will hold its own. I'm glad you didn't mind me killing you off. But, as one astute reader observed. Dead men can't vote. Ha!
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LOL
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, the clear winner here, no close seconds. What a fun romp with so much creativity and so many shameless puns (Karenina and her Triple D's, Always room for Jello, pop the cherry, Assassin's Guild..I could go on)
This is absolutely delightful. And clever: one vote for each name dropped!!xoxox
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Well, the clear winner here, no close seconds. What a fun romp with so much creativity and so many shameless puns (Karenina and her Triple D's, Always room for Jello, pop the cherry, Assassin's Guild..I could go on)
This is absolutely delightful. And clever: one vote for each name dropped!!xoxox
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Can dead people vote? Ha! We shall see, my friend. Appreciate the sixer!
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Well, they certainly seem to be able to in the REAL election, so why not on FS? Or get a Family Voting Block; I understand that's popular on here, too!
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That is exactly what I was talking about. You knew!
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We all know, and yet, still it persists.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was magnificent! You put in a lot of our friends. But Ric would never kill me. He can't even kill me here! Go dare him would you? Dragging an oxygen tank? Kinda kills the sexy outfit. Oh, one more thing. The name is THREADGILL. But, the story was so good, I let you keep your six. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This was magnificent! You put in a lot of our friends. But Ric would never kill me. He can't even kill me here! Go dare him would you? Dragging an oxygen tank? Kinda kills the sexy outfit. Oh, one more thing. The name is THREADGILL. But, the story was so good, I let you keep your six. :-) Karen
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you for creating this fun little romp. I pulled in a lot on sixes on this! Stay frosty, my friend!
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I voted for yours just so you know. The contest is over. :-)
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I think it has another day, but I appreciate your vote. The piece chasing me felt a bit snarky and maybe angry. Not sure. I liked writing this. Did I tell you Tom got upset that I put him in it? I had to switch him out! Oh my! I put him because I like him. BAM!
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Philistines everywhere. When I first read that other piece I thought my god! What did I ever do to that poor women to make her hate me, I asked her what Did I do? She said nothing silly. We don't kill off good people, just the bad ones, so I made you bad. Then, I reread it, and enjoyed it. Karen
