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A Particular Friendship

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We meet Lizzy who has just come out of the convent

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Comment from jim vecchio
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Another case of "Wish I had the sixes!" There is so much to comment on that I want to specifically mention one small detail: the root beer stand with the big glass mugs. What a treat for a kid! There aren't many around nowadays that can remember these things, but I sure do! We also had stands where they made real, hugegantic ice cream sandwiches fresh with crispy waffles and stands where they sold potato chips out of the bag. Sorry for wasting this review, but you brought back some cherished memories!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    Just the fact that you. You would intend to give me sixes is enough Jim thank you for your supportive review. One of my goals is to bring back cherished memories for the readers. So thank you.
reply by jim vecchio on 23-Feb-2024
    I wish the children of today could just taste what real root beer was like!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    Oh yum. How is develop some kind of a decadent strawberry dish. We're talking well over 20 years ago so I have no idea what it was like, i just know it was decadent. lol
reply by jim vecchio on 24-Feb-2024
    Obviously, you are an individual of good taste!
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written chapter of your book. I agree with you that one of the hardest things we have to do in life, especially if we were in a situation, where we might have been abused, or not supported by our parents is the process of accepting ourselves for who we are. I wish you a very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    Well how sweet of a review you have given me Thank you so much It touches my heart deeply.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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You went all over the place in the story. But isn't that how it is in our heads? I imagine lying to cover stuff up was ingrained and second nature. Also, it was one of the reasons you hid in the nunnery for years until you figured you had been punished enough. You are brave. And you have always been fine, just the way you are. Karen :-)

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    Oh my gosh Karen. thank you so much for your insightful supportive review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 23-Feb-2024
    U R Welcome friend. :-)
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    ***Smiles***