A Garden with Wings
A Nature 5-7-518 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is beautiful. Goes well with your words. I like the line with breezy circles, fits the butterflies very well. Great job1
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is beautiful. Goes well with your words. I like the line with breezy circles, fits the butterflies very well. Great job1
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda. I am delighted you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Such beautiful images your words conjure up in this 5-7-5 nature poem. Add to that the perfect artwork you've chosen to accompany your poem and you have a total picture. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Such beautiful images your words conjure up in this 5-7-5 nature poem. Add to that the perfect artwork you've chosen to accompany your poem and you have a total picture. Nicely written.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Marilyn, for the beautiful review. I am truly pleased.
Comment from Begin Again
The gray gloomy days of winter as the dirty snow fades away leaves us yearning for the fresh air, the brilliant colors of flowering buds opening, and of course, the fluttering winds of the butterflies. Beautiful!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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The gray gloomy days of winter as the dirty snow fades away leaves us yearning for the fresh air, the brilliant colors of flowering buds opening, and of course, the fluttering winds of the butterflies. Beautiful!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Let?s hope those sunny Spring days come soon and the swallowtails find their way to our yards, Carol.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job of sharing an image with just three lines. Wonderful word choices. You capture springtime and the lively dance of yellow swallow-tails. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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I thought you did a great job of sharing an image with just three lines. Wonderful word choices. You capture springtime and the lively dance of yellow swallow-tails. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Michael, for the high praise of my poem.
Comment from Julie Helms
And now you have me in spring mode! I can't wait. Lovely poem with butterflies and flowers. Nicely worded in a short format. Saucy and cavort are great word choices. Best of luck in the contest! Julie.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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And now you have me in spring mode! I can't wait. Lovely poem with butterflies and flowers. Nicely worded in a short format. Saucy and cavort are great word choices. Best of luck in the contest! Julie.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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So pleased I could put you in Spring mode with my short poem, Julie. I am delighted you like my word choices.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I think we all hail spring as it is so very welcomed, what a wonderful presentation you have created here, as your words and selected artwork paint a beautiful image, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Excellent, I think we all hail spring as it is so very welcomed, what a wonderful presentation you have created here, as your words and selected artwork paint a beautiful image, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, kahpot, for your high praise of my poem.
Comment from teafor2
Unknown bard, this is what the originators (Japanese) had in mind for the haiku form: simplicity; to compress in a harmonious way, with a brevity of
words to capture acute feelings and insights. Precise observation and awareness of an object is garnered when limning it without frills: No caps, no rhyming, no punctuation unless proper nouns. Good luck in the contest
teafor2
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Unknown bard, this is what the originators (Japanese) had in mind for the haiku form: simplicity; to compress in a harmonious way, with a brevity of
words to capture acute feelings and insights. Precise observation and awareness of an object is garnered when limning it without frills: No caps, no rhyming, no punctuation unless proper nouns. Good luck in the contest
teafor2
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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I am honored to think I fulfilled the requirements the Japanese originators had in mind for the haiku form. Many thanks, teafor2, for your high praise.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Each line connecting well with the next. Good complimentary picture.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Each line connecting well with the next. Good complimentary picture.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, BB, for your very kind praise of my poem.
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You are welcome