Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

When our children were growing up we didn't get the quiet of the room. It was more like Crash, Boom, Bang! Grab the mop. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thanks, Mike. I appreciate your reading it and for the kind review. Yes, we had plenty of Crash, but we found time for the many other things that are important. God bless you, too.

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thanks, Mike. I appreciate your reading it and for the kind review. Yes, we had plenty of Crash, but we found time for the many other things that are important. God bless you, too.

Comment from locust

Excellent

Such a sweet and tender poem. I love things that capture the gentleness of love. The refrain was a good choice. I don't play any instruments, but this is one I would enjoy listening to on a soft guitar.

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thank you for your nice words. I do have a version of this that is played with a soft guitar. Email me at nval@me.com, and I will send it to you.