The Mushroom
15 Syllables18 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
I like mushrooms. Eating them that is. You have enlightened me to another side of them. Thir fight to break through the earth and then to make more mushrooms and then retire as you so aptly describe.Nice effort and I hope it goes well in the contest.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I like mushrooms. Eating them that is. You have enlightened me to another side of them. Thir fight to break through the earth and then to make more mushrooms and then retire as you so aptly describe.Nice effort and I hope it goes well in the contest.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Comment from gramalot8
This is a very good entry for the 15 syllables contest,
I loved the simple yet perfectly stated life of the mushroom,
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This is a very good entry for the 15 syllables contest,
I loved the simple yet perfectly stated life of the mushroom,
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Comment from Brenda Strauser
What an interesting poem. I've never heard of a field mushroom. I like where you said it Shoulders itself. Very good poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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What an interesting poem. I've never heard of a field mushroom. I like where you said it Shoulders itself. Very good poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You make a very good analogy with your poem and it also has a very strong and striking presentation. I like that you added in your author's note how you came across this particular writing and what caused you to write this particular poem. If we're not learning something as we're expressing ourselves then it's kind of a waste both are wasted the expression and the Knowledge, I feel. Thank you for sharing this poem. It is thought provoking too.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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You make a very good analogy with your poem and it also has a very strong and striking presentation. I like that you added in your author's note how you came across this particular writing and what caused you to write this particular poem. If we're not learning something as we're expressing ourselves then it's kind of a waste both are wasted the expression and the Knowledge, I feel. Thank you for sharing this poem. It is thought provoking too.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Mushrooms need just the right environment to grow and I enjoyed your 15 syllable post Mark and I wish you luck with this one, magic mushrooms, love Dolly x x x x x x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Mushrooms need just the right environment to grow and I enjoyed your 15 syllable post Mark and I wish you luck with this one, magic mushrooms, love Dolly x x x x x x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Comment from Dimzdale1
I dread the limits place on artistry, but it takes an artist to find a way to make sense of it and still emerge with something beautiful. It causes me to see the struggles of being born, briefly living and retuning to the earth. Thank you for your gift.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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I dread the limits place on artistry, but it takes an artist to find a way to make sense of it and still emerge with something beautiful. It causes me to see the struggles of being born, briefly living and retuning to the earth. Thank you for your gift.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 15 syllable contest. I love the visual of the mushroom birthing itself, shoulders first through the ground. Very creative description. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the 15 syllable contest. I love the visual of the mushroom birthing itself, shoulders first through the ground. Very creative description. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Comment from jessizero
This was a very interesting poem, and you expressed it in fifteen syllables (yes, I counted)! I like that this is a reflection on a different line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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This was a very interesting poem, and you expressed it in fifteen syllables (yes, I counted)! I like that this is a reflection on a different line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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