A Night To Remember
A 100 word flash fiction for your entertainment12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
This is a good entry in this flash fiction contest, when it rains it pours, and it certainly.would've driven both of them into the pub to consume a warming whisky. Well done, good post, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : He made his (way) to the bar.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is a good entry in this flash fiction contest, when it rains it pours, and it certainly.would've driven both of them into the pub to consume a warming whisky. Well done, good post, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : He made his (way) to the bar.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the gracious review and editorial comments. I guess that i need to improve my proofreading skills. I will edit the story. Thanks again for your help.
Comment from lancellot
Not sure how this is a spoof. Doesn't a bartender always pour? I would think the ending over. You'll likely need something stronger. You will lose some votes with the woman's description alone. I don't mind, but this is FanStory.
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Unnoticed he made his [way] to the bar and ordered a Jameson Irish whiskey.
-missing word or to save words
-Unnoticed he walked to the bar and ordered a Jameson Irish whiskey
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Not sure how this is a spoof. Doesn't a bartender always pour? I would think the ending over. You'll likely need something stronger. You will lose some votes with the woman's description alone. I don't mind, but this is FanStory.
notes:
Unnoticed he made his [way] to the bar and ordered a Jameson Irish whiskey.
-missing word or to save words
-Unnoticed he walked to the bar and ordered a Jameson Irish whiskey
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the gracious review and editorial comments. I guess that i need to improve my proofreading skills. I will edit the story. Thanks again for your help.Thank you for the gracious review and editorial comments. I guess that i need to improve my proofreading skills. I will edit the story. Thanks again for your help.Thank you for the gracious review and editorial comments. I guess that I need to improve my proofreading skills. I will edit the story. Thanks again for your help.
