God's Guinea Pig
free verse16 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think animals can definitely be gifts from God! You did a great job describing this guinea pig and your relationship with her. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I think animals can definitely be gifts from God! You did a great job describing this guinea pig and your relationship with her. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
Comment from Spitfire
There are some fine ideas hear that link the guinea pig to what he find in God:
guinea pig love is soft/like God saying/welcome home
Also: she wakes me up/in the early morning/
so I will not miss/work/God's guidance/
in action
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There are some fine ideas hear that link the guinea pig to what he find in God:
guinea pig love is soft/like God saying/welcome home
Also: she wakes me up/in the early morning/
so I will not miss/work/God's guidance/
in action
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
Comment from judiverse
This is so sweet. I've not been around guinea pigs, so I'm always amazed to read about how clever and loving they are. I like your description of being large in presence. Animals seem to have a sense of how you're feeling. My cats sensed how I was feeling after my husband died and they were right there to offer their love. Great entry for the club. judi
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This is so sweet. I've not been around guinea pigs, so I'm always amazed to read about how clever and loving they are. I like your description of being large in presence. Animals seem to have a sense of how you're feeling. My cats sensed how I was feeling after my husband died and they were right there to offer their love. Great entry for the club. judi
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
Comment from kahpot
Guinea Pigs are so cute, I have not had one as a pet, your poem makes me wonder if I have missed out on something, an excellent free verse for the challenge club, very well presented****kahpot
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Guinea Pigs are so cute, I have not had one as a pet, your poem makes me wonder if I have missed out on something, an excellent free verse for the challenge club, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Aw this is so sweet! Wonderful poem, so descriptive I can almost hear the excitement when you arrive home. Guinea pigs are great pets but no matter what animal you choose, a house is a home when you have a pet. Thanks for sharing.
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Aw this is so sweet! Wonderful poem, so descriptive I can almost hear the excitement when you arrive home. Guinea pigs are great pets but no matter what animal you choose, a house is a home when you have a pet. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge. Your imagery and descriptive words share your story. People like myself who have had pet guinea pigs will relate. Well written.
Best wishes,
Alex
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. Your imagery and descriptive words share your story. People like myself who have had pet guinea pigs will relate. Well written.
Best wishes,
Alex
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
