On Mountains Tall
Rhyming poem, inspired by sermon.15 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, as it has such a wonderful message. The photo suits your words very well. I was wondering though, is it supposed to be caing or carrying for His sheep?
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, as it has such a wonderful message. The photo suits your words very well. I was wondering though, is it supposed to be caing or carrying for His sheep?
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for stopping by by reading my work and leaving such a nice review
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A wonderful poem. Appreciate you sharing it.
Comment from GoWiSt
"As He's carrying for Hissheep." Separate His from sheep.
Indeed, indeed, the Lord is with us everywhere.
"even when we're fasts asleep," fast--not fasts.
Nice rhymes.
Nice comforting Christian poem.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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"As He's carrying for Hissheep." Separate His from sheep.
Indeed, indeed, the Lord is with us everywhere.
"even when we're fasts asleep," fast--not fasts.
Nice rhymes.
Nice comforting Christian poem.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and such a nice comment.
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely poem celebrating our loving Shepherd who is always with us. What a secure feeling to know that He watches over us whether we are awake or asleep or struggling with something.
Typos:
carrying for Hissheep. (His sheep)
even when we're fasts asleep, (fast)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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A lovely poem celebrating our loving Shepherd who is always with us. What a secure feeling to know that He watches over us whether we are awake or asleep or struggling with something.
Typos:
carrying for Hissheep. (His sheep)
even when we're fasts asleep, (fast)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for making time in your day to review my work and leaving an ice comment.
Comment from royowen
The one thing about the Lord, He's always on our cease, He'll rescue us when we're lost, save us from ourselves quite, all we need do is ask Him, all praise to Him, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : He's carrying His()sheep. 2: when we're fast(s) asleep.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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The one thing about the Lord, He's always on our cease, He'll rescue us when we're lost, save us from ourselves quite, all we need do is ask Him, all praise to Him, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : He's carrying His()sheep. 2: when we're fast(s) asleep.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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It is always with gratitude of my heart that I enjoyed your comments and your review
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Well done Pat
Comment from Julie Helms
Hi Patricia! I love it when I'm inspired by a sermon. Sounds like you heard a great one. I have a couple suggestions that I think are typos:
As He's carrying for Hissheep.
(As He's caring for His sheep)
even when we're fasts asleep,
(fast asleep)
You have done a lovely job. Thanks so much for sharing!
Julie :-)
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hi Patricia! I love it when I'm inspired by a sermon. Sounds like you heard a great one. I have a couple suggestions that I think are typos:
As He's carrying for Hissheep.
(As He's caring for His sheep)
even when we're fasts asleep,
(fast asleep)
You have done a lovely job. Thanks so much for sharing!
Julie :-)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Your reviews are important to me and I thank you so much for the typo. Correction. I made the correction.
