Daylight Darkness
A 5-7-5 Poem20 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those sunglasses were needed to watch sun being overshadowed by the moon, I watched it on the TV, it was quite a momentous event, I enjoyed your fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Those sunglasses were needed to watch sun being overshadowed by the moon, I watched it on the TV, it was quite a momentous event, I enjoyed your fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Great use of words that captures the recent eclipse
Many people did have glasses on. "The darkest of days" is a perfect line with much meaning, reflecting our modern times.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Great use of words that captures the recent eclipse
Many people did have glasses on. "The darkest of days" is a perfect line with much meaning, reflecting our modern times.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
Yes, it wouldn't be the brightest day, with the eclipse in totality excluding the sun from shining it's bright light on the earth, An excellent post Kahpot, using the satori with flair, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Yes, it wouldn't be the brightest day, with the eclipse in totality excluding the sun from shining it's bright light on the earth, An excellent post Kahpot, using the satori with flair, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed this 5-7-5, expressing very well how man had to protect his eyes from the dangers of the power of nature. It also reminds us of our need for the sun, and how it is far beyond our power to control. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this 5-7-5, expressing very well how man had to protect his eyes from the dangers of the power of nature. It also reminds us of our need for the sun, and how it is far beyond our power to control. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Wendy, for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
For a brief moment in time, mankind was united with one purpose. To view a miracle. And those glasses were a means to that end. I liked your perspective.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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For a brief moment in time, mankind was united with one purpose. To view a miracle. And those glasses were a means to that end. I liked your perspective.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I especially liked the title of this 5-7-5 poem and the comment about men hiding behind their shades. The artwork along with the background color and the text color really makes the whole thing pop off the page. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I especially liked the title of this 5-7-5 poem and the comment about men hiding behind their shades. The artwork along with the background color and the text color really makes the whole thing pop off the page. Nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, it must have an amazing sight, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This turned out to be such a big ordeal. We watched it for my home. The sky got dark but didn't get completely dark by us. Excellent poem well written!
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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This turned out to be such a big ordeal. We watched it for my home. The sky got dark but didn't get completely dark by us. Excellent poem well written!
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Alex, that must have been quite a sight, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Douglas Goff
It was really the best time to steal wallets. Ha! Just kidding. You really did find a perfectly brilliant picture of the eclipse didn't you!
Great read. I enjoyed your 5/7/5.
Douglas
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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It was really the best time to steal wallets. Ha! Just kidding. You really did find a perfectly brilliant picture of the eclipse didn't you!
Great read. I enjoyed your 5/7/5.
Douglas
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Ha! Ha! Thank you very much, Douglas, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What happened? Where was I? j.k. but I didn''t look. As for the glasses do you recall the 3-d movies from the fifties. I suspect the crown mentioned was similar to those days.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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What happened? Where was I? j.k. but I didn''t look. As for the glasses do you recall the 3-d movies from the fifties. I suspect the crown mentioned was similar to those days.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Tom, and yes, I remember, apparently these are somewhat similar, really the lenses are plastic, but that just would not fit, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written haiku style writing for the eclipse of the sun that just took place. I enjoyed reading it very much and you did a very good job with it.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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This is a very well written haiku style writing for the eclipse of the sun that just took place. I enjoyed reading it very much and you did a very good job with it.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
