Pet Peeve
It's the little things!17 total reviews
Comment from FurryBunny
I appreciate the humorous tone of the poem and the way it conveys everyday frustrations in a relatable way. The rhyme scheme is clever and the poem flows well. Overall, it's a light-hearted and enjoyable piece that many people can relate to. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I appreciate the humorous tone of the poem and the way it conveys everyday frustrations in a relatable way. The rhyme scheme is clever and the poem flows well. Overall, it's a light-hearted and enjoyable piece that many people can relate to. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from jim vecchio
What you need is to get a cleaning lady, like the one I have. Then I make sure everything is off the floor and there is no dirty laundry or junk hanging around, so it'll be clean before she gets here!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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What you need is to get a cleaning lady, like the one I have. Then I make sure everything is off the floor and there is no dirty laundry or junk hanging around, so it'll be clean before she gets here!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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LOL! Isn't that the truth? Thanks so much!
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Thanks for your writing!
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Haha Well said. You created a good poem with nice rhymes and good flow.
I totally agree with the sentiments, too. In my house some of it doesn't even make it near the basket, laying as it was thrown - on the bedroom floor. Arrrrgh!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Haha Well said. You created a good poem with nice rhymes and good flow.
I totally agree with the sentiments, too. In my house some of it doesn't even make it near the basket, laying as it was thrown - on the bedroom floor. Arrrrgh!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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The pain is real-LOL! Thanks so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a perfect and relatable poetic rant. I think most people could understand this as we all miss the hamper sometimes. You use good words and rhyming plus vivid imagery to get your point across and it's a very strong rant for the challenge.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This is a perfect and relatable poetic rant. I think most people could understand this as we all miss the hamper sometimes. You use good words and rhyming plus vivid imagery to get your point across and it's a very strong rant for the challenge.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Although cute, this is a legitimate rant. My kids through their clothes.....pretty much everywhere.
And they have hampers in their rooms. Many times Mrs I go in, stepping over piles of dirty clothes to get to the hamper that I find is ...empty!!!! Arrrgh.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Although cute, this is a legitimate rant. My kids through their clothes.....pretty much everywhere.
And they have hampers in their rooms. Many times Mrs I go in, stepping over piles of dirty clothes to get to the hamper that I find is ...empty!!!! Arrrgh.
D
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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The pain is real-LOL! Thanks so much! (I finally got my grandson to do his own laundry so now he digs through the hamper looking for his things & leaves all the rest on the floor--small victories.)
Comment from Wojciech Gurak
This poetic rant is really excellent. Hilarious. Love it. It draws the reader easily into the world of empty hampers. It's the one which is so relatable because it is unfortunately replicated elsewhere.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This poetic rant is really excellent. Hilarious. Love it. It draws the reader easily into the world of empty hampers. It's the one which is so relatable because it is unfortunately replicated elsewhere.
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Laundry can be one of the biggest chores in the house, I know my daughter struggles with how high the mountain is. I just put my laundry straight into the washing machine! Ha ha ha, you made me smile with this post, great rhymes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Laundry can be one of the biggest chores in the house, I know my daughter struggles with how high the mountain is. I just put my laundry straight into the washing machine! Ha ha ha, you made me smile with this post, great rhymes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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It's a continuous struggle to keep up--thanks so much!
