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Comment from cupa tea
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I was thinking Soylent Green as I was reading your story and then you said you based it upon that show. Old people get the worse of it even in stories...lol...good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you. You never know how something will play out on FS. Ha!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This was an enjoyable read. You do a wonderful job of weaving together themes of scientific ethics and the pursuit of progress. The characters, particularly Hattie Mulhouse and Dr. Magnus, are wonderful portrayed. The dialogue is sharp and engaging which is perfect for the tension found in the ethical debates.

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thanks! This turned out interesting.
Comment from pit viper
Exceptional
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Excellent and creative entry. No SPAG errors that I noticed. I love stories with a dark twist. I agree with you that there ought to be a "disturbing content" warning available. Many of my stories include no overt sex, violence, or profanity, yet I would not want children to read them because of the disturbing themes. Anyway, great story and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you! I appreciate your kindness.