Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Not just a beautiful vision, but a really beautiful feeling you built with this crescendo poem. The subject was a perfect choice for this style of poetry. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Good morning, June!
You have described the arrival of Spring in northern Michigan perfectly.
She just appears... overnight! And I love her!
The magnolias are just popping here = so beautiful!
Loving the form and the intensity it conveys.

Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!