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To My Mom

A 5-7-5 Poem

18 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Great selection of the photograph for the words you penned. And the message written could be speaking of either the mum or the baby now grown up, so it seems to me.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Tom, yes, just to my mom, going to visit her soon, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
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As we approach Mother's Day I feel this is a lovely tribute to your mother who was steadfast in her love for you and commitment to you. Sometimes mothers are only physically present, but not emotionally. You are blessed that she was there for you. You chose a very beautiful image too.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Wendy, I am just leaving to visit my mom, and thought this was appropriate, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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What a nice tribute to your mother, who seems to have been stalwart and loyal. This is timely, since I guess Mother's Day is only about two weeks away, too. Good luck in that contest!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your 5/7/5 syllable entry- good syllable count and supporting picture presentation- a clever connection between the first and third line - changing 'as moms go- first impression - nicely done - Bless - AP

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you, AP, I am just on my way home to visit my mom, and thought this was appropriate, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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The artwork is moving and brings the message home. Your mom never wandered and for that, you are eternally grateful. I agree she is a keeper and you are so lucky to have her in your life for all time.
This is a sure winner and I think you are improving all the time.
Jesse

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Jesse, my mom is a keeper, and I am very happy that I am improving, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Jesse James Doty on 29-Apr-2024
    You're welcome.
    Keep writing and stay healthy.
    Jesse
Comment from royowen
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Well yes, although my mum and dad actually divorced, my dad remarried, but mum did not, I don't think she liked men anyway, I think she was a one man woman, well done my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Roy, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by royowen on 29-Apr-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine tribute to your Mother who was always there for you, this does not happen in all families, but I am glad you paid tribute to your Mother here, a fine post, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Dolly, for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
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I still remember that picture of you and your brothers and your mom. It was clear there was so much love among you. Thanks for giving tribute to your faithfully loving mom! Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, I am leaving to visit her again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by lyenochka on 29-Apr-2024
    Safe travels to you! Hope you have a great visit!