I Promise
To James my one and only16 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There are some strong emotions going on here and I think your message comes over powerfully and poignantly. Best of all I like that it is not overly sentimental but speaks plainly from the heart that the world isn't a welcoming place without this loved one. Charmingly presented. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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There are some strong emotions going on here and I think your message comes over powerfully and poignantly. Best of all I like that it is not overly sentimental but speaks plainly from the heart that the world isn't a welcoming place without this loved one. Charmingly presented. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you so much Debbie!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This sounds like James your true love is in heaven and you are asking him to shine his light so that you can fly to him and be where there is no fearful realm. I agree life can be frightening and if you miss your true love then it will seem like an eternity until you are together again.
Jesse
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This sounds like James your true love is in heaven and you are asking him to shine his light so that you can fly to him and be where there is no fearful realm. I agree life can be frightening and if you miss your true love then it will seem like an eternity until you are together again.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Spot on. Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Jesse
Comment from Raul1
It is well written and you have penned it very good. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Interesting. Nice. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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It is well written and you have penned it very good. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Interesting. Nice. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Nicki.B
So sorry for your loss. This poem is a short sweet and emotional sentiment to your lost love one. The expressions are really lovely for such a short poem. And so very sad too, loss is speechless but you found the right words. Well done
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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So sorry for your loss. This poem is a short sweet and emotional sentiment to your lost love one. The expressions are really lovely for such a short poem. And so very sad too, loss is speechless but you found the right words. Well done
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
A rather good entry in this three line contest my friend, it's not a bad thing to leave this earth and dwell with each other in a realm far from the madding crowd, who may cramp one's style, well don, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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A rather good entry in this three line contest my friend, it's not a bad thing to leave this earth and dwell with each other in a realm far from the madding crowd, who may cramp one's style, well don, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you Roy. I do agree but struggle with faith..
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I think we all do at times
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great three line poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and you addressed a loved one as was required. Your last line was great, and I loved your font and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I think this was a great three line poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and you addressed a loved one as was required. Your last line was great, and I loved your font and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you so much Jessi!
