Return To Concorde Valley
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Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! Is Hades going to kiss her in front of everyone? I can't remember if Theo and Echo have kissed - seems like they got really close at one point. Hopefully, Adam will have a plan to rescue Echo in the nick of time. But time is running out fast. Good to have the prophecy spelled out so we see what is at stake.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Oh no! Is Hades going to kiss her in front of everyone? I can't remember if Theo and Echo have kissed - seems like they got really close at one point. Hopefully, Adam will have a plan to rescue Echo in the nick of time. But time is running out fast. Good to have the prophecy spelled out so we see what is at stake.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hi Helen,
Thank you, so much for the review. I warned you Echo would face some danger. She still has friends, but some evil will befall her. She's dealing with some dangerous characters. It'll all work out in the end, though.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Yes, she will prove that her name is Perseverance!
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Indeed!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This was a shocking ending. He is going to force his kiss on Echo and make her eternal, but isn't that supposed to be done by Theo? How will she stop him with all his henchmen looking on.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This was a shocking ending. He is going to force his kiss on Echo and make her eternal, but isn't that supposed to be done by Theo? How will she stop him with all his henchmen looking on.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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It's not over yet...
Thank you for the review and concern, but don't worry about Echo. It'll all work out.
Rhonda
Comment from royowen
How interesting, it almost seems like Hades is pretty invincible, incredibly cunning, but I think that Echo will find a kink in his armour, she is the factor which will either promote him, or defeat him. This is aside my Grandson Miah is playing the son of Amadea, who murders her two sons to spite Jason, who gained the Golden Fleece with her help, a modern take on the myth of the same, He and his fellow actor Eddie, had great acclaim in reviews of the play, it's a professional play, a one act play by the Queensland theatre co. Miah is Only eleven, his friend Eddie is eight, they are on stage fo 75 minuses, I'm so proud on my gifted grandson(s) and granddaughter, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : She put on (head) on forehead. Hand?
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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How interesting, it almost seems like Hades is pretty invincible, incredibly cunning, but I think that Echo will find a kink in his armour, she is the factor which will either promote him, or defeat him. This is aside my Grandson Miah is playing the son of Amadea, who murders her two sons to spite Jason, who gained the Golden Fleece with her help, a modern take on the myth of the same, He and his fellow actor Eddie, had great acclaim in reviews of the play, it's a professional play, a one act play by the Queensland theatre co. Miah is Only eleven, his friend Eddie is eight, they are on stage fo 75 minuses, I'm so proud on my gifted grandson(s) and granddaughter, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : She put on (head) on forehead. Hand?
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you for finding the typo, my friend. Thank you for the review and I'm so proud of the grandkids!! Yay!!! They got the family talent, I see. Good for them!! Thank you for sharing with me!
Thanks again,
Rhonda
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Bless you
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine chapter, Rhonda....will Hades have his way with Echo? Not THAT way, although he'd like that also. Will Echo be able to fend off his amorous advances? The answers lie in wait in the next exciting chapter of Return to Concorde Valley
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Another fine chapter, Rhonda....will Hades have his way with Echo? Not THAT way, although he'd like that also. Will Echo be able to fend off his amorous advances? The answers lie in wait in the next exciting chapter of Return to Concorde Valley
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hi Mike, thank you so much for the review, my friend! Answer: Yes, he will get part of his way with her, but... it's not over 'till the fat god sings, lol.
Take care,
Rhonda
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Ha!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Rhonda, sadly I have nothing more to give you but this is an exceptional, faultless read, spelling out so much of the plot as we see another much more scheming side to Hades' character. Like it or like it not, he's a hard one to resist and I'm still drooling after seeing that fine image of him! Echo, however, is keeping strong though, despite all those girly temptations of gown and jewels, not to mention Hades' dazzling appearance and charm. She has to keep reminding herself that it's he who has made her an orphan and hang on to the message that this is a war between good and evil. Right now, she's on the wrong side and needs to use all her powers of resistance. Well done, Rhonda! Debbie xo
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reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Rhonda, sadly I have nothing more to give you but this is an exceptional, faultless read, spelling out so much of the plot as we see another much more scheming side to Hades' character. Like it or like it not, he's a hard one to resist and I'm still drooling after seeing that fine image of him! Echo, however, is keeping strong though, despite all those girly temptations of gown and jewels, not to mention Hades' dazzling appearance and charm. She has to keep reminding herself that it's he who has made her an orphan and hang on to the message that this is a war between good and evil. Right now, she's on the wrong side and needs to use all her powers of resistance. Well done, Rhonda! Debbie xo
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Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hi Debbie, thank you so very much for the wonderful review. It was a tough chapter, which is why I had the lighter hearted one last time. Echo is definitely in a tough place, but Hades won't hurt her too bad, lol.
Thanks for looking though it with your careful eye. Always appreciated!!
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, my goodness! This is awesome!!!! Wowsers, again! Does it count if he forces a kiss on her? Theo better hurry in with his royal, immortal lips puckered!! Just saying! Hades' has her in the wedding dress-- check! Wearing the betrothal gems, emeralds, her favorite-- double check! And H is looking mighty fine with the guests assembled! Quadruple check! I am SO looking forward to the next chapter! Superb, my friend. Brava!
Sending you my best today as always, and love and blessings across the bridge.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Oh, my goodness! This is awesome!!!! Wowsers, again! Does it count if he forces a kiss on her? Theo better hurry in with his royal, immortal lips puckered!! Just saying! Hades' has her in the wedding dress-- check! Wearing the betrothal gems, emeralds, her favorite-- double check! And H is looking mighty fine with the guests assembled! Quadruple check! I am SO looking forward to the next chapter! Superb, my friend. Brava!
Sending you my best today as always, and love and blessings across the bridge.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Sally, thank you so much for the sweet review! I appreciate the time you took to read and comment. Yes, things are definitely going Hades' way at the moment, and the best thing Echo can do is just let it play out. She still has friends in high places, though.
Much love, my dear,
Rhonda
Comment from Leigha Demosten
It was a enjoyable read. Keep up the good work. I love how you were so descriptive towards each character, I really felt like I was there first hand. I will look out for more of your work in the future.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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It was a enjoyable read. Keep up the good work. I love how you were so descriptive towards each character, I really felt like I was there first hand. I will look out for more of your work in the future.
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Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hi Leigha. I'm glad you stopped by to review. You seemed to like it. As you gave me 4 stars, can you let me know what you think I can do to improve? I love getting feedback.
Take care,
Rhonda