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Comment from zaraduck6
I loved reading this poem! It was truly brilliantly written, with nice images to cap it off. What a wonderful word choice and structure. The literary devices fit perfectly. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I loved reading this poem! It was truly brilliantly written, with nice images to cap it off. What a wonderful word choice and structure. The literary devices fit perfectly. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Zara
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so rich in detail that this reader can't help but fall in love with this man, even disregarding the visual! I really enjoyed how you introduced that background nobility, providing an additional layer to an already compellingly beautiful man!! Well done Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This is so rich in detail that this reader can't help but fall in love with this man, even disregarding the visual! I really enjoyed how you introduced that background nobility, providing an additional layer to an already compellingly beautiful man!! Well done Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
This is a pair written Japanese poem that you have presented us today and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the very best for the rest of the week. Patricia
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This is a pair written Japanese poem that you have presented us today and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the very best for the rest of the week. Patricia
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, patricia
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I was testifying to whom I want to be like, it was Christ, am I like Hom, not much, nobody is really like Him, but He's the model. Beautifully written Gypsy, bless you, blessings Roy
Suggestion, (Find a purest love) find a purer love.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Oh yes, I was testifying to whom I want to be like, it was Christ, am I like Hom, not much, nobody is really like Him, but He's the model. Beautifully written Gypsy, bless you, blessings Roy
Suggestion, (Find a purest love) find a purer love.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I corrected it. Thanks!
Gypsy
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Most welcome, well earned
Comment from nancyjam
I love this beautiful poem about Christ. Very descriptive images, especially in the last verse.
An interesting poetic form. You made good use of it here.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I love this beautiful poem about Christ. Very descriptive images, especially in the last verse.
An interesting poetic form. You made good use of it here.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Nancy
Gypsy
