Mother Natures Prose
A beautiful new day.17 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Three Line Poetry Contest entry.
Based on Mother Nature's part in Creating Mother Earth.
Well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This is a Three Line Poetry Contest entry.
Based on Mother Nature's part in Creating Mother Earth.
Well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Doc!
Comment from royowen
An excellent poem Douglas, the painting is certainly filled with vibrant colours, my mother was a cooking marvel, she only painted on painting, a landscape, Iowa's brilliant, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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An excellent poem Douglas, the painting is certainly filled with vibrant colours, my mother was a cooking marvel, she only painted on painting, a landscape, Iowa's brilliant, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thanking you my friend. Mother is a treasure!
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I?m sure
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Douglas,
Wonderful entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count. I would connect line one and two lines to improve the flow but is not necessary.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hello, Douglas,
Wonderful entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count. I would connect line one and two lines to improve the flow but is not necessary.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It is a political statement that we had better start treating the Earth like a loved one or we will lose her. People say I?m going to get DQ,d because Mother Earth is not a loved one. Ha! Toying with switching the first word to mother instead of morning. Still would carry the same meaning?
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That is a great message. You could add to your author notes that it's about the way we treat our planet but I get it. Many times I leave it up to the reader to figure it out.
Comment from jessizero
It's good to see you! I liked your poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right. However, I don't think this counts as being addressed to a loved one like the contest required. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It's good to see you! I liked your poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right. However, I don't think this counts as being addressed to a loved one like the contest required. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It is a political statement that we had better start treating the Earth like a loved one or we will lose her. People say I?m going to get DQ,d. Ha! Toying with switching the first word to mother instead of morning. Still would carry the same meaning?
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That makes sense! I hope you don?t get disqualified.
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Good to see you, too! Like the new photo! Thanks for the input.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I have gotten to where I'm reading the contest entry to make sure I understand the poem. I am guessing your 'loved one' is Mother Nature'. Am I correct? Sunrise does often seem as if the sky is painted. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I have gotten to where I'm reading the contest entry to make sure I understand the poem. I am guessing your 'loved one' is Mother Nature'. Am I correct? Sunrise does often seem as if the sky is painted. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It is a political statement that we had better start treating the Earth like a loved one or we will lose her. People say I?m going to get DQ,d. Ha! Toying with switching the first word to mother instead of morning. Still would carry the same meaning?
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maybe, not sure people would make the connection to Mother Nature. Who knows.
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I do walk the line, my friend.
Comment from Sally Law
This is beautiful, my friend, rather like a haiku/ekphrastic poem rolled into one. A lovely offering and strong contender for the three line poetry contest. A winner in my eyes!
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the contest.
Sal :)) xo
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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This is beautiful, my friend, rather like a haiku/ekphrastic poem rolled into one. A lovely offering and strong contender for the three line poetry contest. A winner in my eyes!
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the contest.
Sal :)) xo
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It is a political statement that we had better start treating the Earth like a loved one or we will lose her. People say I?m going to get DQ,d. Ha! Toying with switching the first word to mother instead of morning. Still would carry the same meaning?
Comment from Kennedy Jaymes
Author,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It made me feel calm and allowed me to picture a morning sunrise in my head. Adding the photo was also a wonderful touch that helped me picture it in my head better.
You are a wonderful writer.
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Author,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It made me feel calm and allowed me to picture a morning sunrise in my head. Adding the photo was also a wonderful touch that helped me picture it in my head better.
You are a wonderful writer.
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you!