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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Shadow Man"A collection of poems
19 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
This is a great entree for this particular contest, a well-crafted piece. The artwork pair nicely. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the votes.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is a great entree for this particular contest, a well-crafted piece. The artwork pair nicely. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the votes.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you.
So much, Steve.I'm glad you liked it.And I appreciate your comments too.And your time to write them as well as your fine rating.I hope you have a great day.Thanks again!
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My pleasure, Lea.
Comment from estory
There's something of the anticipation of the moment in this poem, there's the uncertainty of watching the moment coming, the excitement of being caught in its mysterious beat. I liked the pulsing rhythm of this, the stripped down, hammering pulse of the language. estory
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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There's something of the anticipation of the moment in this poem, there's the uncertainty of watching the moment coming, the excitement of being caught in its mysterious beat. I liked the pulsing rhythm of this, the stripped down, hammering pulse of the language. estory
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much.It's very kind of you to say.I appreciate your fine review and the great writing you have applied. Thank you again.I hope you have an amazing day!
Comment from Shanbreen
This is a well-written five line poem. A bit sinister, but what has to be said, has to be said. The poem builds tension ending in the shadowy man... for a brisk staccato beat. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is a well-written five line poem. A bit sinister, but what has to be said, has to be said. The poem builds tension ending in the shadowy man... for a brisk staccato beat. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and insight that you have passed on, I'm glad that you like it. I thank you again.It is a privilege and I hope your day is amazing!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
An excellent 5 line poem Lea with the shadow man invading your space, your mind with a very eerie beat of your heart. Visions of the past I am thinking with this one. Good luck in the contest Lea.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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An excellent 5 line poem Lea with the shadow man invading your space, your mind with a very eerie beat of your heart. Visions of the past I am thinking with this one. Good luck in the contest Lea.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Valda Thank you so much for your fine rating and great review as always.I'm happy to hear from you and how do you be back writing again! Nice to see you here again.And I hope that you're having an awesome day.Thank you!
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent five line poem. It is a little eerie. I don't like these birds hanging around. I'm not superstitious but they give me the creeps. One sat on my Mom four floor window at the hospital all day the day she died.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is an excellent five line poem. It is a little eerie. I don't like these birds hanging around. I'm not superstitious but they give me the creeps. One sat on my Mom four floor window at the hospital all day the day she died.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi thank you so much thank you Thank you for writing and reading and offering your fine rating! That is a bit spooky with your mom like that wow! I hope you're well always glad to see your review.And happy to see that you're out there.Writing still and I'm glad to be back.Thank you again!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A dark sense of foreboding in your verse, Lea. Your visual also suggests something quite sinister or exciting awaiting you. You build tension here, reinforced by your final staccato beat. Hoping that this is not a continuation from your last worrying encounter. Take care, Lea and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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A dark sense of foreboding in your verse, Lea. Your visual also suggests something quite sinister or exciting awaiting you. You build tension here, reinforced by your final staccato beat. Hoping that this is not a continuation from your last worrying encounter. Take care, Lea and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi debbie thank you again For your fine rating and for your time Is reading and it always awesome review! I also wanted to let you know the book It's coming out very soon.I have knuckle down and done much of the editing It is at the publishers as we speak going through the design process. I wanted to thank you for your ongoing support.I was wondering if it's okay to mention your name for those I deem extra helpful like yourself.
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That's so sweet, Lea, yes of course it's ok. And great news about the publishing. Hope you're well and not being harassed anymore etc. xos
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write of how new things in life surprise us and shock us into reality at times, I enjoyed the sentiments here Lea, a fine post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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A poignant write of how new things in life surprise us and shock us into reality at times, I enjoyed the sentiments here Lea, a fine post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Dolly.I'm glad you like it! I hope you're well and having a great summer I appreciate you as always.And I hope that all is well in your world and thank you again for reading And writing and stopping by!
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Thank you Lea, yes I'm having a great Summer, I hope you are enjoying yourself too x x x
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Each word of this poem by itself does have its own connotations, but put together as you have, we have an entire perception. This is a very good contest entry. Thank you for sharing it and good luck.
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Each word of this poem by itself does have its own connotations, but put together as you have, we have an entire perception. This is a very good contest entry. Thank you for sharing it and good luck.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi, thank you so much.And will you like this one! Thank you for Reading and writing is always im happy to see you here! I hope that you are well.You know, see that you're doing great as always with your writing.Because you are a great writer.Congratulations! Thanks again.I hope you're having an amazing day!
Comment from royowen
This is one of those stories that builds perception in the reader of it, shadow men usually mean there's a troubled hidden memory of an event that might mean dealing with, beautifully written Lea, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is one of those stories that builds perception in the reader of it, shadow men usually mean there's a troubled hidden memory of an event that might mean dealing with, beautifully written Lea, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi roy thank you so much For your
Fine rating and your comments is always! I have finished My first book and it is gone to siri editing as I have been working for it on it For some time in a couple of weeks, it's going to be out.I wanted to thank you doubly for your kind support throughout I wish to thank you firmly on the pages of my book if that is acceptable to you Thank you again have a great day!
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Fine with me Lea