2024 Gypsy's Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Short Black Dress".
17 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a sensual and alluring seventy-five word flash fiction. I didn't know what to expect, but I'm glad it ended on a happy note. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This was a sensual and alluring seventy-five word flash fiction. I didn't know what to expect, but I'm glad it ended on a happy note. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Fashionistas know the value of that "short, black dress" as it does imply so much. Your little 75-word story is full of the possibilities of romance and it's a very private affair as she closes the door to the world outside.
Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Fashionistas know the value of that "short, black dress" as it does imply so much. Your little 75-word story is full of the possibilities of romance and it's a very private affair as she closes the door to the world outside.
Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister, I hope I win. 🙂
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
pizza and horror movies... and then dessert... LOL!
great little story flash
good imagistic word choices and the story was easy to follow...
flash fiction usually has some element of surprise at the end though...
other than that, a good story.
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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pizza and horror movies... and then dessert... LOL!
great little story flash
good imagistic word choices and the story was easy to follow...
flash fiction usually has some element of surprise at the end though...
other than that, a good story.
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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The rules didn't explained that, they just said any topic 75 words. but you know more about prose than I do.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
And I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely week and may God bless you. Continue to share your lovely writing with us. God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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And I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely week and may God bless you. Continue to share your lovely writing with us. God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Gypsy, even your prose reads like poetry: smooth, seamless, artistic (the honeysuckle breeze squeezes between the blinds) and exciting (Yearning rushes through my veins and my skin is ablaze.)
Very enticing 75-word flash! I hope to see it in the Winner's Circle!! xoxox
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Gypsy, even your prose reads like poetry: smooth, seamless, artistic (the honeysuckle breeze squeezes between the blinds) and exciting (Yearning rushes through my veins and my skin is ablaze.)
Very enticing 75-word flash! I hope to see it in the Winner's Circle!! xoxox
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Rachelle
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
What a sexy little story! It has vivid images in it with the nice, descriptive words. I love the last sentence especially. Without saying it, we all know what will happen next!
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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What a sexy little story! It has vivid images in it with the nice, descriptive words. I love the last sentence especially. Without saying it, we all know what will happen next!
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Lindsey Russell
Beautiful! It tells a story but leaves the following events and ending up to the reader's imagination. I love that sometimes! Thank you for sharing and best of luck in your writing endeavors.
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Beautiful! It tells a story but leaves the following events and ending up to the reader's imagination. I love that sometimes! Thank you for sharing and best of luck in your writing endeavors.
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
