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Adam Questions

A free verse poem.

14 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
Exceptional
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-This is very good, A.Z. and welcome to FanStory.
-I like your definition of "Adam questions."
-You do a good job presenting different views with your questions.
-A few of them that stood out for me are the one about
the second amendment and "victim's right to life."
-Another thought provoking one is about "the first
people to love you and "first to hate you when you come out to it?"
-The next one about running the country is definitely relevant in
the current political climate.
-A very good question at the end.
-Thanks for sharing your ideas and hope you enjoy the site.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Jul-2024
    You are very welcome and deserving.
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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I've read the 2nd amendment and it doesn't say what Americans think it says, if we embraced it as a form of free self expression, we'd have lots of mass murderers as you do, our laws were changed after some nut shot and killed 35 men women and children with a high powered rifle in 1996 by a brave Prime Minister. So, no wonder there are shootings by police who don't know if their quarry is armed or not. Well done, I'm glad you embraced the principal of freedom for all, that is the definition of what law does, the protect of all equally, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by royowen on 14-Jul-2024
    Well done
Comment from Bill Schott
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Ooooh! I see that the Adam questions have matured and taken on some sharp edges as you have grown, my Son. I knew the answer to your other questions; these might take a crystal ball.

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
    Haha! Let me know what you divine, Father!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
    Haha! Let me know what you divine, Father!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Excellent
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Good grief Herbert, I wish I had a six left. This is astonishing, baffling, called for, direct, extraordinary,
frank, glorious, hard to ignore, intelligent, just what we needed to hear, kerosene on the fire, lavish, marvelous, necessary, open minded, positively grand, questioning, reality based, sensible, teachable, universally understood, vexing, world weary, xcellent (okay I cheated there), yearning, and tada...Zesty.
Karen

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
    Thank you, again, Karen! I loved your alphabetical review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Jul-2024
    I like all the weird stuff we can do. Karen