So Much Better
The hunter is the hunted.13 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a chilling twist! The initial buildup with Drake's sinister intentions set me up for a familiar ending. But you got me! I did not expect her response. haha The poetic justice is wonderful. You didn't have many words but this worked so well. Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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What a chilling twist! The initial buildup with Drake's sinister intentions set me up for a familiar ending. But you got me! I did not expect her response. haha The poetic justice is wonderful. You didn't have many words but this worked so well. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Thesis
It sounds like they were made for each other, LOL. You led me down the path thinking this was a dare rape, then twisted the scenario to her being the predator. Well done.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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It sounds like they were made for each other, LOL. You led me down the path thinking this was a dare rape, then twisted the scenario to her being the predator. Well done.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! I love twists in stories :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. You don't see a lot of horror Flash fiction so this was exciting. The twist ending was perfect. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. You don't see a lot of horror Flash fiction so this was exciting. The twist ending was perfect. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!