Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, :let's hope Jonathon manages to stay away from the gambling, and gets his life together. Now Eleanor needs to sort Nick out, what a scumbag he is! And then she need to go after Judge Slimeball!!!
I wonder if she will go and see Charles before she leaves this world. That would be romantic. :)) You're doing a wonderful job with this story, my friend. Loving it! :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Well, :let's hope Jonathon manages to stay away from the gambling, and gets his life together. Now Eleanor needs to sort Nick out, what a scumbag he is! And then she need to go after Judge Slimeball!!!
I wonder if she will go and see Charles before she leaves this world. That would be romantic. :)) You're doing a wonderful job with this story, my friend. Loving it! :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I've got a long ways to go and a short time to get there...LOL I have to make up for lost time that's for sure. So much going on.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Eleanor seems to be having a good effect on her brother if his word can be believed, but he is in a dangerous situation and could easily blow his million dollars on gambling. Margaret learns there is a price to get her daughter back, but Nick has already disposed of her and just wants the money. Jenna gets to share some of Eleanor's life through her WWII letters.
The tension builds again until easing off with Jenna enjoying Eleanor's letters.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Eleanor seems to be having a good effect on her brother if his word can be believed, but he is in a dangerous situation and could easily blow his million dollars on gambling. Margaret learns there is a price to get her daughter back, but Nick has already disposed of her and just wants the money. Jenna gets to share some of Eleanor's life through her WWII letters.
The tension builds again until easing off with Jenna enjoying Eleanor's letters.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Jenna has much to learn from the letters and dylan is still on the search for his uncle's paintings. I think it will come together soon.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray - now a relationship is healed and Jonathon is pulled out from addiction. I hope he really means it when he says he won't gamble anymore. What a great idea to set up a halfway house for gamblers.
I met one and he was a brilliant man and yet he was helpless when it came to gambling.
Hope Jenna will mean with Dylan again soon now that she knows how Eleanor's relationship with Charles began.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Hooray - now a relationship is healed and Jonathon is pulled out from addiction. I hope he really means it when he says he won't gamble anymore. What a great idea to set up a halfway house for gamblers.
I met one and he was a brilliant man and yet he was helpless when it came to gambling.
Hope Jenna will mean with Dylan again soon now that she knows how Eleanor's relationship with Charles began.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I think that part of the story will grow and there is so much to learn and share. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like this story already, it has mystery, sarcasm, hope, love and mischief. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I like this story already, it has mystery, sarcasm, hope, love and mischief. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Hello Iza...Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. We had a tornado and lost all our power for five days. All is good and I am trying to get caught up. Thanks@
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent chapter, showing snippets from various threads of this complex but fascinating book. Nick has been very clever and sees himself in a good position, but it will fall apart, as the judge will find a way to deal with him. Lovely that Jenna can read Eleanor's letters, as it will give insight into the previous life and love of Eleanor. And I think she will get together with Dylan. Well written. I am enjoying ths a lot.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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An excellent chapter, showing snippets from various threads of this complex but fascinating book. Nick has been very clever and sees himself in a good position, but it will fall apart, as the judge will find a way to deal with him. Lovely that Jenna can read Eleanor's letters, as it will give insight into the previous life and love of Eleanor. And I think she will get together with Dylan. Well written. I am enjoying ths a lot.
Wendy
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thanks Wendy...I think the letters will definitely mean a lot to Jenna. She'll be able to understand and see a lot of Eleanor that she didn't know.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hopefully I don't read any posts out of order since I caught this one. So, Nick is in on the kidnapping. I knew the Judge was. Good post.
Listen, lady, you look like my sister, but you can't be. She's dead. And I refuse to believe I am talking to a ghost." He slammed the drink and signaled for another one.
"You won't escape your problems with that stuff." (Two dialogues in one paragraph. You need a space.
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Hopefully I don't read any posts out of order since I caught this one. So, Nick is in on the kidnapping. I knew the Judge was. Good post.
Listen, lady, you look like my sister, but you can't be. She's dead. And I refuse to believe I am talking to a ghost." He slammed the drink and signaled for another one.
"You won't escape your problems with that stuff." (Two dialogues in one paragraph. You need a space.
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Don't be reading out of order, Barbara. You'll get as mixed up as I am. LOL Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol