Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so beautiful. For me it is a reminder that compassion, even from a single person, can make a make a big difference in our lives. Your words offer such comfort and I enjoyed reading your poem. Such a wonderful message and so well written.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024

Thank you very much Michael. I appreciate your very kind words!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

There's nothing like bringing joy in a world of little joy, and there is little in the homeless place, when conditions are pretty cold, a beautifully written and shaped nonet, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you very much, Roy.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I've seen four entries to this contest three have been reverse nonets

This has a great sentiment. Love from one person can lift you up.

Right now, I'm trying to save my grandson from a psychotic break. If that happens, he may end up dead or in jail. He thinks everybody's out to get him except me and his other grandma.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.



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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for reviewing, and I am encouraged by your words. I hope all goes well for your grandson, and that he can find comfort and strength from both his grandmothers. It's good you are both there for him, and that he trusts you. Best wishes.