I Die Tomorrow
The final countdown.15 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Nicely cast in Purple plumes and her deceit if came true?
Merely coincidence.
I can tell you though there are real not psychics.But real influences that will blow are human beings mind.
I will present one in the future just for you,Douglas.
Entitled,"Ghana Experience"
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Nicely cast in Purple plumes and her deceit if came true?
Merely coincidence.
I can tell you though there are real not psychics.But real influences that will blow are human beings mind.
I will present one in the future just for you,Douglas.
Entitled,"Ghana Experience"
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I shall be looking for it. Doc! Appreciate your kind words and six stars!
Comment from Sally Law
Don't you believe it!!! It's funny, or not funny, because I was just reading my lab results. My cholesterol is always high. Always. It's hereditary from my mother. Mama smoked most of her life and died of metastisized cancer when she was 80. She went very quickly. I remember cleaning out her medicine chest and all she had was her thyroid pills, aspirin, and cholesterol lowering medication she never took.
Avoid psychics in your future.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new day.
Sal :)) xo
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Don't you believe it!!! It's funny, or not funny, because I was just reading my lab results. My cholesterol is always high. Always. It's hereditary from my mother. Mama smoked most of her life and died of metastisized cancer when she was 80. She went very quickly. I remember cleaning out her medicine chest and all she had was her thyroid pills, aspirin, and cholesterol lowering medication she never took.
Avoid psychics in your future.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new day.
Sal :)) xo
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Ha! Fabrication as stated in the story description. Yes, I do have high cholesterol. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story. Nicely written. But you somehow lost 9 years.
...ten years from now, disbeliever!" she hissed.
I didn't give the incident much thought until a year later...
The bad news is I die tomorrow.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Nice story. Nicely written. But you somehow lost 9 years.
...ten years from now, disbeliever!" she hissed.
I didn't give the incident much thought until a year later...
The bad news is I die tomorrow.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Geez, it is funny how one misplaced word changes the entire piece. Good eye, kind Sir, good eye!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was a slow build up. I loved it. Appearances can be deceiving. I have green, blue, and purple mascara thank you very much. They match my contacts. I have to stock up around Halloween. Oh shut up! I heard that. Menfolk, so close minded. We dress for us, not you. It makes me smile, I feel a little silly and it makes me have a good mood. You try to be closed up and tancturn while wearing colored mascara! I dare you! Karen
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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This was a slow build up. I loved it. Appearances can be deceiving. I have green, blue, and purple mascara thank you very much. They match my contacts. I have to stock up around Halloween. Oh shut up! I heard that. Menfolk, so close minded. We dress for us, not you. It makes me smile, I feel a little silly and it makes me have a good mood. You try to be closed up and tancturn while wearing colored mascara! I dare you! Karen
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Huh? Did this come across twice?
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Not that I am aware of. :-)
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Good to know!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Always destined to end badly for the narrator, I enjoyed this! The dialogue, as I would expect from you, is superb and the descriptive detail of the psychic, enhanced by the colour of the presentation, captures the character in all her mystic power! The one thing I got confused about was the predicted date of death which was ten years hence and yet the last sentence refers to tomorrow....Is it me or could that be clarified more in the story? But an excellent, humorous and enjoyable read, Doug! Well done! Debbie
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Always destined to end badly for the narrator, I enjoyed this! The dialogue, as I would expect from you, is superb and the descriptive detail of the psychic, enhanced by the colour of the presentation, captures the character in all her mystic power! The one thing I got confused about was the predicted date of death which was ten years hence and yet the last sentence refers to tomorrow....Is it me or could that be clarified more in the story? But an excellent, humorous and enjoyable read, Doug! Well done! Debbie
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Yeah, I worded it poorly. All fixed. Thank you!