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Comment from Ric Myworld
It's hard to imagine where your imagination might take you and where your stories might go. But this might really be called "When men were women." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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It's hard to imagine where your imagination might take you and where your stories might go. But this might really be called "When men were women." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Funny honey. Did you see marilyn's doggie poem? Hysterical. I have been writing up a storm while I have been in limbo. Missed you though. If you can bend, take a hot soak with epsom's salt. Love you sweetie pie. Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Interesting Sci Fi or Fantasy contest entry. There are days, I would like to ship my husband off to Mars. LOL But most the time he's a pretty good guy and as a mother of four boys, when they young all together, I would have liked to ship them off to. But again, they turned out to be great guys, even their wives think so. I had fun reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Interesting Sci Fi or Fantasy contest entry. There are days, I would like to ship my husband off to Mars. LOL But most the time he's a pretty good guy and as a mother of four boys, when they young all together, I would have liked to ship them off to. But again, they turned out to be great guys, even their wives think so. I had fun reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I wasn't as lucky with husbands. So, safely on here I rip'em a new one. It is legal and can be fun. THanks for the nice review. Karen
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Love your attitude.
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What? I should mope while they go about their lives? I can eviscerate them here legally.
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LOL
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very interesting. And well-written except for a couple minor glitches.
Another problem, It is May - oops (it)
The "real" women could give birth still but only by being impregnated. - uh...duh? (maybe you meant artificially impregnated?
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Very interesting. And well-written except for a couple minor glitches.
Another problem, It is May - oops (it)
The "real" women could give birth still but only by being impregnated. - uh...duh? (maybe you meant artificially impregnated?
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I edited. How in the blue blazes did I miss saying ( artificially impregnated). Good grief Herbert. No one else spotted it yet. Thanks so much for your eye. Karen
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smiley face here
I kinda did think you should have known about the impregnation thing.
smiley face here
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Sure, make me feel like a dolt.
who says impregnate thses days besides fertility doctors anyhoo? Thanks for your eagle eye. Karen
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a fairly long post for you. Very imaginative, and I kind of agree with the premise. That is, having worked in an Agency with a female Executive Director and females in high positions, I feel females can be much brighter than men. And having married a "leftie", I feel left-handed females are the smartest! One small hiccup: In the paragraph about George #2, the parenthesis is detached from the phrase.
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This was a fairly long post for you. Very imaginative, and I kind of agree with the premise. That is, having worked in an Agency with a female Executive Director and females in high positions, I feel females can be much brighter than men. And having married a "leftie", I feel left-handed females are the smartest! One small hiccup: In the paragraph about George #2, the parenthesis is detached from the phrase.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I fought with it for two weeks. It seemed like an impossible task, Then, I realized I was trying to write it straight. How dumb am I? After I pulled my head out of you know where, I moved along lots quicker. I think I did okay. I hammered men. But I do it legally, does that count? :-)
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I believe your writing was so original and different, it will find its way to the top!
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I am in a mood these days. I am not looking forward to going through all my stuff and giving so much away. It reminds me how my husband lost us our house. Spending the mortgge money on cam girls. How he spent all my savings. How he wrecked a lot of my
collections that i had counted on to sell to finance my golden years. I get mad and sad. :-(
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I wish I could have been there to help you. My wife and I made an agreement before God not to leave our marriage, though there would have been strict consequences if I filed her.