On a Moonlit Desert Road
I could if she would see us...14 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
To which you replied, "Honey, I can't. It has taken complete control and MUST be satisfied. Nay. It DEMANDS to satisfy you. Please, dear, for your own safety, remove all encumbrances forthwith.
(smiley face here)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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To which you replied, "Honey, I can't. It has taken complete control and MUST be satisfied. Nay. It DEMANDS to satisfy you. Please, dear, for your own safety, remove all encumbrances forthwith.
(smiley face here)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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One happy thought deserves a second and your review made my day
Thank you
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Great and delicious entry into the contest.
I bet there are hundreds of stories where wives tossed cold water on bring a dream into reality.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Great and delicious entry into the contest.
I bet there are hundreds of stories where wives tossed cold water on bring a dream into reality.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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What you say might be true but what of the gals? Is it water that douses their flame or E.D.?
Comment from tfawcus
Reality can be a cruel medicine, even if it does bring us back to our senses! It is only effective for a short while though. It doesn't take long to resume the fantasies. Sometimes they're all we've got! LOL
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Reality can be a cruel medicine, even if it does bring us back to our senses! It is only effective for a short while though. It doesn't take long to resume the fantasies. Sometimes they're all we've got! LOL
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you
Did the piece arrive in good order as I read here it was
Misaligned on my Pro pad when on my desk top it views as I wanted
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Oh dear. The missus really knows how to stop a party. Very good Flash story with twist ending intact. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. Oh dear. The missus really knows how to stop a party. Very good Flash story with twist ending intact. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I try, both literally and figuratively to keep dreams alive but (sigh) I stray only in my dreams where she prays I grow up. Thanks.
