Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from BethShelby
The room with the painting Dylan wasn't allowed to stay in must have been the counterfeit paintings. It is gook that Nick has been caught and I hope he will b willing to talk. I'm glad you're back posting regularly.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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The room with the painting Dylan wasn't allowed to stay in must have been the counterfeit paintings. It is gook that Nick has been caught and I hope he will b willing to talk. I'm glad you're back posting regularly.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I'm glad I am back too. thank you! though catching up before I run out of time is tough. It's a busy story. Thanks again, Beth.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Carol
First off, I can tell you proofread your work over and over again in order to get it error-free. I admire that about your work.
Second, Eleanor's role in this particular chapter has been reduced, but the effects of what she did in previous chapters is showing up now
It's too bad that Garth and Donatelli can't work together. But unfortunately, that is how law-enforcement is. I have my turf and you have yours and stay off of my turf and I'll stay off of yours. But, that doesn't work because the crimes are related and they need to share information
I'm not sure what Dylan has gotten himself into or whether his life is in danger. He probably should've called the police once he saw that the paintings did not belong to the auction house.
I look forward to the next chapter
I enjoyed reading your book tractor
Good job. Thank you for sure.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Hi, Carol
First off, I can tell you proofread your work over and over again in order to get it error-free. I admire that about your work.
Second, Eleanor's role in this particular chapter has been reduced, but the effects of what she did in previous chapters is showing up now
It's too bad that Garth and Donatelli can't work together. But unfortunately, that is how law-enforcement is. I have my turf and you have yours and stay off of my turf and I'll stay off of yours. But, that doesn't work because the crimes are related and they need to share information
I'm not sure what Dylan has gotten himself into or whether his life is in danger. He probably should've called the police once he saw that the paintings did not belong to the auction house.
I look forward to the next chapter
I enjoyed reading your book tractor
Good job. Thank you for sure.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Jenna is on her way and Garth is right outside...So I think Dylan will be okay. Donatelli lost the girl a long time ago and that still sticks in his mind...He'll soon come to terms I think.
It's getting harder and harder of late to make sure I get it right because my eyes are failing, especially since I am trying to write so much. Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi again!!
I'm caught up with today's posts anyway. I'll try to go back and read earlier chapters when I have a chance.
So, Eleanor turns her ethereal head long enough to miss Peter taking the package out of the locker, but it doesn't really matter since he's a decoy.
I think you switched names with Peter and Nick, or I missed something. If so, I do it all the time, otherwise, I need to figure out how he fits in.
So, Garth and Donatelli have an exchange of heated words. A little rivalry going on?? Hehe, always fun.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Hi again!!
I'm caught up with today's posts anyway. I'll try to go back and read earlier chapters when I have a chance.
So, Eleanor turns her ethereal head long enough to miss Peter taking the package out of the locker, but it doesn't really matter since he's a decoy.
I think you switched names with Peter and Nick, or I missed something. If so, I do it all the time, otherwise, I need to figure out how he fits in.
So, Garth and Donatelli have an exchange of heated words. A little rivalry going on?? Hehe, always fun.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Peter was detained by Jenna and Nick was watching as a precaution. When he saw Peter wasn't picking up the package he did...and got caught instead of Peter. Hope that makes it clear.
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Ohhh, okay, thanks!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have been praying for you. I've missed your writing these past few days. I hope everything is okay and you've just been busy. I enjoyed reading this post. Excellent.
A stern voice broke the silence. "Excuse me, sir, but this is a private area. (silence,)
Donatelli grinned, "Just a million bucks in ransom money. You've got a lot of explaining to do." (grinned.)
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I have been praying for you. I've missed your writing these past few days. I hope everything is okay and you've just been busy. I enjoyed reading this post. Excellent.
A stern voice broke the silence. "Excuse me, sir, but this is a private area. (silence,)
Donatelli grinned, "Just a million bucks in ransom money. You've got a lot of explaining to do." (grinned.)
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Had a tornado...92 mph winds. Snapped off all the trees in the area. My house is okay but didn't have any power or water for five days. But here I am again!!
Donatelli suspects the Judge but he just can't make himself give in to Garth. He's not going to have a choice.
Comment from Chip Whitley
This is a well-developed piece. I can tell that you spent time crafting each interaction and piece of the excellent story. I enjoyed all of your characters and I appreciated the attention to detail in developing a hand written letter from Eleanor.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This is a well-developed piece. I can tell that you spent time crafting each interaction and piece of the excellent story. I enjoyed all of your characters and I appreciated the attention to detail in developing a hand written letter from Eleanor.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Wow! Not only do I get to welcome you to Fanstory and for reading a chapter in my story, but I am blessed with glittery stars. Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughts and the stars.
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol