Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Eleanor, an energizer bunny, what everyone wants at some point in life. But I guess they truly only come in ghost form. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Eleanor, an energizer bunny, what everyone wants at some point in life. But I guess they truly only come in ghost form. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, sir. These puppy is about to be finished. Actually have the final two chapters in progress but I might hold off on posting until everyone gets caught up. The weekend should be a good time....that way I can read to so I can get some money to post.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad the girls are safe and will soon return to their homes. Matthew did this with the help of Eleanor and not my hunky cowboy. That's okay. It shows my hunky cowboy how valuable he is.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I'm glad the girls are safe and will soon return to their homes. Matthew did this with the help of Eleanor and not my hunky cowboy. That's okay. It shows my hunky cowboy how valuable he is.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Donatelli is giving him all the paperwork though...so generous of him. But he's not done yet!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awww, what a lovely ending to the bit about Megan. Eleanor and the others were able to work together to get Megan rescued. How frightened the girls must have been, and how brave of Eleanor to go to the lengths she did to help her niece and the other captives. The sad thing is, though this is fiction, it really does happen all around of us all the time.
Well penned, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Awww, what a lovely ending to the bit about Megan. Eleanor and the others were able to work together to get Megan rescued. How frightened the girls must have been, and how brave of Eleanor to go to the lengths she did to help her niece and the other captives. The sad thing is, though this is fiction, it really does happen all around of us all the time.
Well penned, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I know but I'm a writer with a mushy heart...good things always have to happen even if they don't go that way in real life. Thank you so much for reading...The story is getting close to the end with maybe another surprise or two.
smiles, Carol
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Of course you have a tender heart, and one of the messages of your book is that human trafficking does occur, and there are people who truly love these people.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from BethShelby
Another plan goes through to completion with Eleanor's help. That is what we need. A bunch of ghost on the police force. I'm sure it would be a big boost to the force. Now I'm wondering what the ladies is up too. She needs to be able to see her beloved Charles at some point. I'm sure you've got it all figured out.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Another plan goes through to completion with Eleanor's help. That is what we need. A bunch of ghost on the police force. I'm sure it would be a big boost to the force. Now I'm wondering what the ladies is up too. She needs to be able to see her beloved Charles at some point. I'm sure you've got it all figured out.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Yes, especially an Eleanor! We are widing down but there is a few more surprises.... Thanks so much!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from tfawcus
There's a great balance between humour and tension in this chapter. The change in venue ramps up the action, and the showdown is believable. Eleanor's part is great - she reminds me of Oscar Wilde's Canterville Ghost.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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There's a great balance between humour and tension in this chapter. The change in venue ramps up the action, and the showdown is believable. Eleanor's part is great - she reminds me of Oscar Wilde's Canterville Ghost.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. I never thought I would enjoy writing about a ghost so much, but adding it into my mystery/crime genre has been a blast. I could imagine a series of stories with my detectives and Eleanor. LOL Woah! Much too fast! I've got this story to finish first.
Thanks so much for your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Liliana Tricks
Your story tugs at the heartstrings, weaving a tale filled with surprises and intriguing characters. The vivid imagery and suspenseful moments draw readers in, creating a captivating narrative where the ordinary meets the extraordinary. The interplay between the characters and the touch of the supernatural add depth and excitement to the story, making it a delightful read.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Your story tugs at the heartstrings, weaving a tale filled with surprises and intriguing characters. The vivid imagery and suspenseful moments draw readers in, creating a captivating narrative where the ordinary meets the extraordinary. The interplay between the characters and the touch of the supernatural add depth and excitement to the story, making it a delightful read.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you for stopping by to read a chapter in my story. It does have a lot of emotional ups and downs and a drop of humor as well. I appreciate your time and comments.
Smiles, Carol