Virtuous Love
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. This is a romantic flash story that appears to be of a wedding night where love is finally fulfilled. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest. This is a romantic flash story that appears to be of a wedding night where love is finally fulfilled. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Nah. The itch seemingly got to be too much and need a scratching. Thank you.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a really romantic story. It's a very good story and I like the overall description of the scene. Really good job with it. Happy writing,, Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is a really romantic story. It's a very good story and I like the overall description of the scene. Really good job with it. Happy writing,, Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I thought it was okay for a three minute tour and only seventy five words. Thank you, and please visit again.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Tom,
I like the passion you deftly write into this 75-word story!
The protagonist proves to be a doting lover who expresses so eloquently his love and passion for his love interest.
I hope this couple fares better than Romeo and fair Juliet. (Sorry I could resist being a little sardonic)
Beautiful story, Tom.. If only everyone's life would imitate this art!
Best wishes,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Tom,
I like the passion you deftly write into this 75-word story!
The protagonist proves to be a doting lover who expresses so eloquently his love and passion for his love interest.
I hope this couple fares better than Romeo and fair Juliet. (Sorry I could resist being a little sardonic)
Beautiful story, Tom.. If only everyone's life would imitate this art!
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you. My wife, when read to her, said I should write romance novels. If they were 75 words, I could.
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Thank you. My wife, when read to her, said I should write romance novels. If they were 75 words, I could.
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Thank you. My wife, when read to her, said I should write romance novels. If they were 75 words, I could.
Comment from Begin Again
My - my, Tom, you indeed have found your faculties in proper working order with this one and led the reader down a path of romance... probably a slippery slope since it had to happen so fast in 75 words. LOL. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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My - my, Tom, you indeed have found your faculties in proper working order with this one and led the reader down a path of romance... probably a slippery slope since it had to happen so fast in 75 words. LOL. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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So, you liked it. When read to my wife she chimed I should be writing romance novels. Do men do that? Thank you.
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Of course...everyone has a romantic bone or two...some just hide it.