Climbing Flowers
Flowers reach for the sky44 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Lovely sentiments here about the flowers and how they fill us with joy Pam. Fine rhymes and metre in this entertaining and sweet natured poem, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Lovely sentiments here about the flowers and how they fill us with joy Pam. Fine rhymes and metre in this entertaining and sweet natured poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely read, Pam, watching the flowers sway with the breeze as they head up high to sunshine. I like that they took you out of yourself, to another place, as you sat watching the beauty of the garden. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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This is a lovely read, Pam, watching the flowers sway with the breeze as they head up high to sunshine. I like that they took you out of yourself, to another place, as you sat watching the beauty of the garden. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the six shiny stars and for your wonderful comments,Valds.
They made my day
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
This is incredibly beautiful and so heartfelt! You are like a flower, paisley girl, a wonderful flower growing and putting your face to the sun catching rays with your poetry! Maddy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This is incredibly beautiful and so heartfelt! You are like a flower, paisley girl, a wonderful flower growing and putting your face to the sun catching rays with your poetry! Maddy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from tfawcus
What a lovely poem, Pam. I especially like your closing couplet:
A climbing bloom I'll never be,
but, flowers are inside of me.
I'm not sure I share your enthusiasm for being buried up to the knees in the garden, especially in the winter! LOL However, it's lovely sentiment and perspective, and your poem reads beautifully aloud.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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What a lovely poem, Pam. I especially like your closing couplet:
A climbing bloom I'll never be,
but, flowers are inside of me.
I'm not sure I share your enthusiasm for being buried up to the knees in the garden, especially in the winter! LOL However, it's lovely sentiment and perspective, and your poem reads beautifully aloud.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Tony for the sick shiny stars for your wonderful comments. They made my day.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Pam,
This is a deceptively simple poem with a large impact that can make
one lose track of space and time. A garden is a likely place where beauty
lives and shows her grace.
I hope you want to be a perennial, rather than a short-lived annual.
Nicely done with excellent rhymes and easy meter.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Hello Pam,
This is a deceptively simple poem with a large impact that can make
one lose track of space and time. A garden is a likely place where beauty
lives and shows her grace.
I hope you want to be a perennial, rather than a short-lived annual.
Nicely done with excellent rhymes and easy meter.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I can finally reply to this Robert. I know I sent you my review by private message but here I'm just trying to clear it from my queue.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Reflection, daydreaming, all can be nice. You wrote this very well. I popped in for a breather between unpacking boxes. I am so tired, and will glad when I can finish nesting. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Reflection, daydreaming, all can be nice. You wrote this very well. I popped in for a breather between unpacking boxes. I am so tired, and will glad when I can finish nesting. Karen
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from mermaids
Love your words. I especially love the wild flowers I see on my walks. Your words make the flowers come alive as if they are actual characters. "They yearn and strain to reach the sky" is a perfect line, for it appears that flowers are trying to do that. Excellent poem about nature that takes the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Love your words. I especially love the wild flowers I see on my walks. Your words make the flowers come alive as if they are actual characters. "They yearn and strain to reach the sky" is a perfect line, for it appears that flowers are trying to do that. Excellent poem about nature that takes the reader to another place.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from June Sargent
I know how you feel. I would love to be a flower that blooms in the sunshine, reaching towards the deep blue sky. U guess I will just have to be satisfied looking at their beauty. A lovely poem that put a smile on my face.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I know how you feel. I would love to be a flower that blooms in the sunshine, reaching towards the deep blue sky. U guess I will just have to be satisfied looking at their beauty. A lovely poem that put a smile on my face.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Ginda Simpson
The idea of flowers being inside of you is a very pleasing image. Your rhyming is flawless and keeps your words flowing to the perfect conclusion. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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The idea of flowers being inside of you is a very pleasing image. Your rhyming is flawless and keeps your words flowing to the perfect conclusion. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Genda for the shiny six stars and for your wonderful comments. They made my day.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Flowers look good and smell nice, but they have no control over their own existence. That doesn't sound like an upgrade from a human life. It's wonderful to see and smell them, though, and there is much joy to be had through that. xo
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Flowers look good and smell nice, but they have no control over their own existence. That doesn't sound like an upgrade from a human life. It's wonderful to see and smell them, though, and there is much joy to be had through that. xo
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
