Spirited Justice
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I keep hoping those other chapters will magically pop up somewhere, like one of your ghosts but i'm glad to see that you are back at it and doing fine. Interesting chapter. I wish I had a hideaway like Sophia. Have a great Sunday!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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I keep hoping those other chapters will magically pop up somewhere, like one of your ghosts but i'm glad to see that you are back at it and doing fine. Interesting chapter. I wish I had a hideaway like Sophia. Have a great Sunday!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Actually I had this chapter sitting in my portfolio ready to post or it would have been gone too. Thanks for reading and for hoping I'd find the others. I can't get my head into writing today, but I will. Yes, Sophia has found her spot!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I know you're still upset about losing your chapters and my heart breaks for you, after recently losing my own. But silly as it sounds, I still believe most things happen for a reason. Although, not always for good reasons. But I do believe that winners win, and losers lose. Mostly because of their mindset. And my dear, you're definitely a winner in my thoughts! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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I know you're still upset about losing your chapters and my heart breaks for you, after recently losing my own. But silly as it sounds, I still believe most things happen for a reason. Although, not always for good reasons. But I do believe that winners win, and losers lose. Mostly because of their mindset. And my dear, you're definitely a winner in my thoughts! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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We both are just going crazy, aren't we? At least I know I am in good company. I'm not sure what the reason was either except maybe to slow me down...for some reason I was consumed with writing and was even getting up in the middle of the night to write. As for being a winner, the feeling is mutual. YOU always put a smile on my face.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
It's already becoming complex with Donatelli not off to a good start in encouraging openness. Eleanor will be able to smooth things with him perhaps. The relationships between Naomi and Donatelli are going to be difficult because of the past and especially now because of Bennett's relationship with Naomi. Well written. Hang in there and keep going - but no pressure, in view of the recent disaster.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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It's already becoming complex with Donatelli not off to a good start in encouraging openness. Eleanor will be able to smooth things with him perhaps. The relationships between Naomi and Donatelli are going to be difficult because of the past and especially now because of Bennett's relationship with Naomi. Well written. Hang in there and keep going - but no pressure, in view of the recent disaster.
Wendy
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thanks WEndy...I really appreciate it. I tried to restart again this morning, but it just wouldn't come. My head wasn't in it, but I know I'll get back to the story...after all I can't just leave them hanging now can I? Thanks again...
smiles, Carol
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It will come back. Maybe a bit different. Would it help to reread your first chapters and see if they will carry you back into your line of thinking?
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That's what I thought I would do...Actually I did it yesterday, but my head was too messed up. I'll do it again and I know it will come. Thanks!
Comment from BethShelby
Apparently I've missed reading a chapter somewhere. These characters are new and don't know anything about blind Sophia or Lila who seems to have been murdered. What kind of pagent is this? A beauty competition?
Don't contestants have to provide their on costume? I'll need to go back and see if I can find what I've missed.
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Apparently I've missed reading a chapter somewhere. These characters are new and don't know anything about blind Sophia or Lila who seems to have been murdered. What kind of pagent is this? A beauty competition?
Don't contestants have to provide their on costume? I'll need to go back and see if I can find what I've missed.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Lila was mentioned as the first deceased pageant contestant (in the prologue) Sophia is her blind sister. The pageant is called Beauty, Brawn, and Brains.... it's not yur usual beauty runway series. This is the first introduction of Sophia...
Sorry if I tossed in a few more characters but I couldn't possibly put them all in the beginning chapter. LOL After losing three chapters, I'm not sure where I am at either.
Thanks for the review, Beth. Have a nice day!
Smiles, Carol
