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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Cute, I think you wrote something similar awhile back. I had fun reading.
He sat down next to her and asked her if she did this all the time? (sat beside her)
After she turned around to face him Hildegard said, (him,)
"I sure hope so, said Hildegard," If I can be a bit selfish, I must admit, I sure miss sugar." ("I sure hope so," said Hildegard, "If I can be a bit selfish, I must admit, I sure miss sugar."
("No,")
He told her "He was a professor of languages at Oxford. (her,)
You can see him can't you Detective?" (You can see him, can't you, Detective?")
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Cute, I think you wrote something similar awhile back. I had fun reading.
He sat down next to her and asked her if she did this all the time? (sat beside her)
After she turned around to face him Hildegard said, (him,)
"I sure hope so, said Hildegard," If I can be a bit selfish, I must admit, I sure miss sugar." ("I sure hope so," said Hildegard, "If I can be a bit selfish, I must admit, I sure miss sugar."
("No,")
He told her "He was a professor of languages at Oxford. (her,)
You can see him can't you Detective?" (You can see him, can't you, Detective?")
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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There was the one about the young lady who had dolls. "Francesca" on page four of my profile. I edited thank you. I appreciate nthe read. Karen
Comment from jim vecchio
Somehow, element in this reminded me of an older post of yours. I expected your usual twist at the end, but this was more subdued. Only one teensy typo: "I happen to have a sweet tooth myself," said Johnathan, -extra h in 'Jonathan'.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Somehow, element in this reminded me of an older post of yours. I expected your usual twist at the end, but this was more subdued. Only one teensy typo: "I happen to have a sweet tooth myself," said Johnathan, -extra h in 'Jonathan'.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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You were probably thinking if "Francesca: on page four of my profile. It was about the lady who boyfriends were dolls.
Thanks for the read. Karen
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Probably. My miniscule brain remembered something. That was probably it.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess, writing is what gives us all the opportunity to venture out and live an alternate life. I mean, for me, the imaginary world is much more exciting and entertaining than the everyday hum drum. LOL.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I guess, writing is what gives us all the opportunity to venture out and live an alternate life. I mean, for me, the imaginary world is much more exciting and entertaining than the everyday hum drum. LOL.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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You betcha. And briefly, when writing I am them. It makes me happy. I have a happy internal life. Thanks for the read and kind words, Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Well, that's no way to keep a boyfriend. A freezer works best, especially during the summer months. Good story. especially liked the ending. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Well, that's no way to keep a boyfriend. A freezer works best, especially during the summer months. Good story. especially liked the ending. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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You crack me up.The others were imaginary. This one was real. Now, he's just real dead. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Begin Again
Oh dear me, Karen, you've knocked another one off. The Detective will be searching your packing boxes soon to check for any missing spar parts. LOL Cute story and an enjoyable read.
Smile, Carol
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Oh dear me, Karen, you've knocked another one off. The Detective will be searching your packing boxes soon to check for any missing spar parts. LOL Cute story and an enjoyable read.
Smile, Carol
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I tell people, I do not carry my work home with me. :-)
Well, she had imaginary boyfriends. Then, he came along, and he was real, now he is real dead. Karen